A Sensory Dream

Back to celebrate your trophy win dear Sotto! Congratulations. You deserve it

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Exquisite Minichu. Yes please do keep on writing, you are the epitome of creative poetry. Sneaking alliteration into your Minichu, so clever and so effective. Congrats my friend. Wen. .

Most enjoyable poem sotto I am glad I visited your page keep on writting hugs Shadow

A delectable array of stanzas, replete with imagery, diction and alliteration. Always impressive. Blessings.

What a delightfully exquisite poem dear Sotto as always from your talented, creative, golden pen. Such beautiful imagery and use of colours ‘ Orchards in glowing pink’. You constantly show that you are a master of poetic elegance, command and creativity. Like so many, I’m in awe of your gift. Good luck in the contest. Blessings to you.

Your minichu flows so beautifully in such a creative manner, and your choice of rhymes are so good here and the way you’ve painted imagery throughout this is beyond ethereal and dreamy, i love your use of colors and descriptive wordplay, and how in such a restrained form you can create something so very moving and stunning is beyond me dear Sotto! Youve done an exquisite job here my fave lines are the orchid and orchard ones that really stood out for me in poetic eloquence! Best of luck

I don't know much about this form. Still I can guess that is not at all an easy form of versification. In your hands anything and everything is easy. You have indeed created a scene of celestial beauty. Great entry. All the Best, dear friend.

A wonderful use of words for this form of poetry... nice rhymes and flow and as always even with such a restricted form, you create imagery..

Loving your colorful alliteration in this challenging form. Bravo on another great poem Sotto. Surely a winner to be in contest!

Wow, dear Sotto, this is such an enchanting and mesmerizing poem with magnificent wordplay..I'm loving your use of colours in this artistically knitted minichu, truly a vivid image of an eloquent sensory dream you've painted here.I feel as if looking on a bejeweled tapestry of eden.."Orchards in glowing pink","dream blossoms swung in a tone of crimson "Your vocabulary is sooo stunning! As always, there's so much to admire in this write "ghost chime the moon may learn" That's an intriguing twist!