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Written: October 21, 2023, For Mohan Chutani Minichu Dream Contest ______________________________ Orchards in glowing pink dream blossoms swung in a tone of crimson pattern nectar drink would dare to dream orchid bow bring bright breath batten wind stream! ghost chime the moon may learn climb!! orchards in glowing pink orchid bow bring bright breath batten climb!!

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Ink Empress

Date: 11/25/2023 10:17:00 AM

Back to celebrate your trophy win dear Sotto! Congratulations. You deserve it

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2023 7:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/24/2023 7:27:00 AM

Exquisite Minichu. Yes please do keep on writing, you are the epitome of creative poetry. Sneaking alliteration into your Minichu, so clever and so effective. Congrats my friend. Wen. .

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/22/2023 2:17:00 PM

Most enjoyable poem sotto I am glad I visited your page keep on writting hugs Shadow

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 10/22/2023 8:41:00 AM

A delectable array of stanzas, replete with imagery, diction and alliteration. Always impressive. Blessings.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/22/2023 8:28:00 AM

Your alliteration and imagery are exquisite. The rhyme scheme just flowed. Truly, Sotto, your words were a sensory dream, so moving. You awe me with your command of vocabulary and the way you seem to use it effortlessly. You're a master. Plus, I liked hearing you read your poem...to have a voice with the name is pleasant. This poem is certainly worthy of a 'win,' but it's already a winner in my book :-) Have a pleasant day, Sara

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/22/2023 7:20:00 AM

What a delightfully exquisite poem dear Sotto as always from your talented, creative, golden pen. Such beautiful imagery and use of colours ‘ Orchards in glowing pink’. You constantly show that you are a master of poetic elegance, command and creativity. Like so many, I’m in awe of your gift. Good luck in the contest. Blessings to you.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/22/2023 3:05:00 AM

Your minichu flows so beautifully in such a creative manner, and your choice of rhymes are so good here and the way you’ve painted imagery throughout this is beyond ethereal and dreamy, i love your use of colors and descriptive wordplay, and how in such a restrained form you can create something so very moving and stunning is beyond me dear Sotto! Youve done an exquisite job here my fave lines are the orchid and orchard ones that really stood out for me in poetic eloquence! Best of luck

Valsa George

Date: 10/22/2023 2:37:00 AM

I don't know much about this form. Still I can guess that is not at all an easy form of versification. In your hands anything and everything is easy. You have indeed created a scene of celestial beauty. Great entry. All the Best, dear friend.

Silent One

Date: 10/22/2023 2:28:00 AM

A wonderful use of words for this form of poetry... nice rhymes and flow and as always even with such a restricted form, you create imagery..

Karen Jones

Date: 10/21/2023 9:57:00 PM

Loving your colorful alliteration in this challenging form. Bravo on another great poem Sotto. Surely a winner to be in contest!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/21/2023 9:44:00 PM

Wow, dear Sotto, this is such an enchanting and mesmerizing poem with magnificent wordplay..I'm loving your use of colours in this artistically knitted minichu, truly a vivid image of an eloquent sensory dream you've painted here.I feel as if looking on a bejeweled tapestry of eden.."Orchards in glowing pink","dream blossoms swung in a tone of crimson "Your vocabulary is sooo stunning! As always, there's so much to admire in this write "ghost chime the moon may learn" That's an intriguing twist!