A sense of something

There was a hush, a sense of waiting
for what? the forest animals were unsure,
just an expectance, an unrest or unsettled
feeling kept them from being relaxed.

What could it be? none was sure
just a feeling that hung in the air
a sense of something not right
a heaviness in the forest air.

Animals milled around
on high alert wondering
waiting not sure what to do
then came a bark of alarm.

Bedlam broke loose
all scattered not sure from what.
just a sense of unease
as they huddled together. 

Then the feeling eased
animals started to relax
soon they were all grazing
going about the day's activities.

The sense of unease
was never solved
but it had been in the air
now all was peaceful once again.
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Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 11:23 AM
It sounds as if you have witnessed such an event? Very well described, Shadow. Reminded me of a Stephen King movie I once saw in which the animals in the woods were acting unsettled
Hamilton Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 2:55 PM
pure imagination Andrea just a reflection on nature herself hugs Shadow
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 5:21 PM
an engaging poem, Shadow, complete with suspense to the very end. Well done
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 4:04 AM
Sara your kind words warm my heart it was fun to write
Goldsmith Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 9:29 AM
"A sense of something" is a wonderful write/story. "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Hamilton Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 9:46 AM
ty Paula for your time in reading hugs Shadow
Leake Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 9:19 AM
This piece kept me on alert Shadow I'm glad everything turned out fine Nicely done Best wishes Kevin
Hamilton Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 9:44 AM
ty Kevin my intention was to keep readers on their toes glad you were hugs Shadow
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