A Seesaw

When I was a lithe young lad at the age of three This chunky lad on a seesaw launched me into a tree Yelled out for help As a branch I felt Entering an orifice that the sun don't see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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December 14, 2017 at 10:56 AM
ow ow ow ow lol! <3
Ellison Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 12:23 PM
I know I know had to use a tiny wee rubber ring to sit on till I was eighteen!!! <3
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December 14, 2017 at 9:54 AM
I do believe you need an amazing artist to draw illustrations of the hilarious scenarios you write about!!! And publish a book!!! You are truly funny!!
Ellison Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 10:44 AM
Funny you should say that! In my working years I was a graphic designer/illustrator! Often thought of publishing a book... even came up with a title, "Limericks Schimericks"! LOL You are sweet dear Judith... love, Jacko!!!
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December 14, 2017 at 9:38 AM
awww what a nasty bully! Or maybe he was so much bigger than you.. lol
Ellison Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 10:40 AM
Maybe twice the poundage!!! Not his fault though... too many english muffins!!! GOOD MORNING (AFTERNOON) MY BRITISH COMPATRIOT!!!
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December 14, 2017 at 8:59 AM
That place has a useful quirk//being placed where the sun doesn't lurk//Not to be seen//but it can be mean//Especially when it doesn't work! SHINE ON LITTLE JACQUE!!!
Ellison Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 10:33 AM
Mine has the opposite affect lately... thinking of placing a potty on my easy chair!!!
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