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A Secret Love Message

the Moon in the clouds the Sun deep down the ocean Earth's message to Mars. * The poem is based on an event when Earth and Mars were at the nearest distance, a sort of rendevous on August 27, 2003.* +++++++ July 26, 2014 Form : Senryu Dr. Ram Mehta Ninth Place Win Contest: In the clouds by Linda The moon - mother The Sun - Father

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Date: 8/26/2014 5:42:00 PM
the side note was very informative for understanding this one, Dr. Ram. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/26/2014 1:16:00 AM
A Great 5/7/5
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Date: 8/25/2014 6:05:00 AM
Wow, i so love this, Dr. Ram! Congrats!
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Date: 8/24/2014 11:21:00 PM
Beautiful symbolism, Dr. Mehta. Well done, sir.
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Date: 8/24/2014 4:53:00 PM
Dr. Ram, please accept my huge congratulations for walking away with this fine win in the contest! Excellent write, my friend! Well-deserved! Pandita
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Date: 8/24/2014 3:41:00 PM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/6/2014 9:06:00 AM
Beautiful, inspirational write, Dr. Ram. Great Senryu! Pandita
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Date: 7/26/2014 12:31:00 PM
its not a secret anymore! fabulous! good luck :)
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