Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Senryu

A Secret Love Message

the Moon in the clouds
the Sun deep down the ocean
Earth's message to Mars.

* The poem is based on an event when Earth and Mars were at the nearest distance, a 
sort of rendevous  on August 27, 2003.*

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July 26, 2014
Form : Senryu
Dr. Ram Mehta
Ninth Place Win
Contest: In the clouds by Linda

The moon - mother
The Sun - Father

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Andrea Dietrich August 26, 2014 at 5:42 PM the side note was very informative for understanding this one, Dr. Ram. Congrats for your win.

Judy Konos August 26, 2014 at 1:16 AM A Great 5/7/5

Hija De La Luna August 25, 2014 at 6:05 AM Wow, i so love this, Dr. Ram! Congrats!

Gary Watkins August 24, 2014 at 11:21 PM Beautiful symbolism, Dr. Mehta. Well done, sir.

Pandita Sietesantos August 24, 2014 at 4:53 PM Dr. Ram, please accept my huge congratulations for walking away with this fine win in the contest! Excellent write, my friend! Well-deserved! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A August 24, 2014 at 3:41 PM Dr Ram, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Pandita Sietesantos August 6, 2014 at 9:06 AM Beautiful, inspirational write, Dr. Ram. Great Senryu! Pandita

Casarah Nance July 26, 2014 at 12:31 PM its not a secret anymore! fabulous! good luck :)