A Secret Kept

Sometimes buried deep can be a secret kept.
If very bad, such a secret festers in the soul.
It rots away like bad meat in a giant bowl
where maggots have formed and yearly crept.

Imagine horrors underneath a carpet swept -
an infestation like that of a nasty mold.
Dirty secrets are the worst inside to hold.
Nightmares could appear as their holders have slept.

Maybe at keeping secrets you’re adept.
That’s okay when secrets aren’t so terrible.
But let loose secrets that are unbearable,
for sometimes a secret should not be kept.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 7:25 PM
Yeah, I agree. I enjoyed this piece, spoke to me...very sageful <3
Hawley Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 7:22 PM
This is deep! Your advice at the end is so true. It sounds like the carpet in your second stanza needs to be burnt. Great poem! 5 star rating!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 5:11 PM
outstanding write, Andrea....there's much to be said about the power of expressing 'secrets'
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 4:34 PM
You are the contemplator whereby the key lies with thee, and when you unlock and see, essence transcends much later—my enclosed rhyme.
George Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 12:58 AM
You are right Andrea. Some secrets kept inside fester our innards. If they are let out, they will greatly relieve us.
Jones Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 12:35 PM
Wow! What skills you showcase in this enclosed rhyme! And content is great as well. Bet you do well in the contest!
Gayagay Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 8:57 PM
I love the whole poem, but especially the imagery and analogy in the first stanza. Good luck on the contest, dear Andrea.
Rolland Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 4:10 PM
"chilly" imagery, secrets are not always good, enjoyed the deepness of your poem, thanks poet Andrea
Canerdy Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 1:11 PM
Yes, kept secrets are a mixed bag. A message well conveyed, Andrea. Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 10:22 AM
"A Secret Kept" is a wonderful write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Most people can Not keep a secret. Have a Blessed weekend writing away..........
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