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A Secret I Can Creep

And I remember everything I’d done that whole day long It seemed no matter how I tried I tried it somehow wrong A Friday of the thirteenth day Had not meant much to me Until I knew it had become The last day I would see I went to go out for a drink That balmy, moonless night And that’s the night that I met Sage A night of lust and fright I followed easily when she Had led me to her lair Who could resist those ruby lips Her locks of raven hair Intoxicated I’d become And I allowed her kiss I felt her penetrate my neck I heard her evil hiss Since then my life has rearranged In hiding must I sleep I slither through the night and that’s A secret I can creep

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Date: 10/15/2023 12:47:00 PM
A very well written poem for Halloween Mike. Never trust Friday 13th to start with! It is quite eerie as you read and I always find the word ‘creep’ quite disturbing especially with horror. This is a great read with impact. Thank you. :):)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/17/2023 3:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Christina xxoo
Date: 10/15/2023 8:58:00 AM
Creep creep she was but an excellent story she allowed you to relate and just before Halloween. Hope you are keeping well Mike business pressure sometimes override us, as we manage a business from home . Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/17/2023 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer, I hope you stay well xxoo
Date: 10/15/2023 1:44:00 AM
oh yes, this is fantastic for Halloween!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/15/2023 8:10:00 AM
Thank you Andrea xxoo
Date: 10/14/2023 2:38:00 PM
perfect Halloween season creation! Rather spooky...but your images were well done...and beware of women that look like Sage...just sayin! enjoy your weekend, Sara
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/15/2023 8:10:00 AM
No worries Sara, I will!! Thank you and Happy Sunday xxoo
Date: 10/14/2023 4:19:00 AM
This is so much in keeping with the Halloween spirit. So spooky and frigtful ! During this season don't get duped by 'raven hair and ruby lips' ! Greatly enjoyed your creepy story, dear Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/14/2023 1:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Valsa xxoo
Date: 10/13/2023 9:29:00 AM
You put yourself in a bad situation. No doubt Sage will eventually get tired of you. And then what... Blessings.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/14/2023 1:01:00 PM
Thank you Victor!!
Date: 10/13/2023 9:19:00 AM
Great for Halloween. The character indeed now is a “creep” and creepy!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/14/2023 1:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim xxoo
Date: 10/13/2023 7:02:00 AM
So poetic. Lust and lechery lead to lies and secrets. No way for a man (or woman) to live. Best to stay sober
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/14/2023 1:00:00 PM
Thank you Tom!

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