A Secret Devotion

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One thing everybody needs if you are to be a writer/ poet, is an agent. Or if you plan on being know or famous for anything, I think you also need a manager.  Their prices are slightly extreme.   I  probably don't have much of a chance. But that's OK.  I refuse to be a victim of 

Fraudulent  book publishers.

The sweetest vision
The tongue cannot taste
She secretly teases me
With amazement amazingly

Restraint, you see has no basis 
My heart traces her laces
Come unwound in the
Shade happiness has its way 

As GLADNESS of the day
Sunshine specialty will begin
And then it gradually fades
Into the horizon of the eastern sky

Scream it  with brashness
Adoringly lightly caress every piano key

Mean it with every breath forsaken
My heart's been given a chore 
I feel it my tender lover
Can you feel this?

We are so close together 
We are now one another
We've become each other
Sweet my gentle tenderly 

Touching me, she says 
I LOVE YOU AGAIN
I whisper, there is no shame
I love you the same

Steady steady misty breaths
Of rich and brazen fascination
Lazily labor in Passion's pleasingly
Poisonous rain I say one last 

Goodbye  I say I love you
The same a burning Passion to
Blame LOVE IMMORTAL  REMAINS

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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