A second glass of wine

Some nights I need a second glass of wine
Here we are poised like vultures on a limb
internal yearnings turn thin fog as we dine.

My mouth stutters as it runs ahead of my confusion
proximity to his powerful aura is a chink in my armor
in his shadow my own worth seems an illusion.

His pale eyes can become cold as glacier
pupils shrink like blackbirds chasing a horizon
to restore a mantle of invincibility my sole prayer.

To nourish my soul with expectations is disappointing
I only feel as conspicuous as a fly on a wedding cake
wishing for solace listening to a song is frustrating.

Now I need not a glass but a bottle of wine
with the edges of the room veiled in darkness
struggling to be formidable will be easy and fine.



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 3/5/2024 11:37:00 AM
Dear Josefina, I love how your poem delves deep into the complexities of desire and vulnerability. The imagery of internal struggles and external pressures is vivid and evocative. Your words resonate with the longing for solace and the pursuit of inner strength. This is quite a raw and reflective piece. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/6/2024 3:55:00 PM
Thank you Daniel for taking time to visit. Appreciate how you have internalized the feelings I am attempting to write here….Josefina
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