Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

A Season's Dance

All seasons romp through nightfall, dawn, and rain
With leaves prancing as breezes lead their  way ,
A tango of summer glazes the spotlight
When boughs display a fired tap to excite.

Soon, autumn bares her petals in orange
To foxtrot with the moon, sleek like curved trees
Cascading on lanes robed in amber and gold
A rhythmic glide that makes chilled buds unfold. 

Though winter mellows when snow meets the dark
December spins a waltz, pacing her gait;
Unlike springtime, raw fragrance in new bloom
Wild rumba thrills high from a floral costume.

Seasons bounce along tempos, each one rare
Welcoming cycles filled with pirouettes
Their symbol of thanks to God for nature’s dance;
Oh dames of joy, bring moments of romance!


A Season's Dance Contest, Gail Doyle
by nette onclaud
10.8.13

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Skat A October 23, 2013 at 1:15 PM congrats Nette.. LOVE --SKAT

Poet Destroyer A October 22, 2013 at 10:04 PM Nette, love it...a wonderful win in Gail's "A Season's Dance " contest.... Always ~LINDA

Kim Merryman October 22, 2013 at 9:59 PM Excellent write, Nette! I like the way you used different dances with each of the seasons. Congrats your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 21, 2013 at 1:04 PM Beautiful, rhythmic words penned, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Christopher Thor Britt October 21, 2013 at 10:27 AM Love it, Nette!

Karen Anglesey October 20, 2013 at 10:50 AM Beautiful lines and imagery. Last line is my fave. congrats on your well deserved win

Olusegun Arowolo October 20, 2013 at 9:02 AM Lovely and awesome piece...Great write,Nette..Congrats on your superb win in this contest...

Sara Kendrick October 20, 2013 at 8:52 AM This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Joyce Johnson October 19, 2013 at 9:42 PM Simply lovely Nette. Congratulations on your no. 1 win. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards October 19, 2013 at 7:49 PM Your seasons are dancing like sugarplums throughout this beautiful poem!! Lovely work, Nette! Congrats to you!

Sandra Adams October 19, 2013 at 4:36 PM beautiful dance through words on pages, you paint the scene well...congrats on your win :)

Seren Roberts October 19, 2013 at 4:20 PM Well done Nette....Seren

Dan Kearley October 9, 2013 at 2:10 PM Wow Nette! You really know how to bring the words to life! I see you've been writing some rhymes lately... I will look forward to reading them as soon as I get the time. Thank you for stopping by with your comments on my song. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :o)

Jack Jordan October 8, 2013 at 9:59 PM Nicely done! My favorite line is, "to foxtrot with the moon." I love the way you've woven the dances together. Good luck in the contest... Jacck

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 8, 2013 at 9:33 PM Beautiful, Nette! I love every line and the last stanza brought it all together perfectly...a winner for sure. Love and blessings, Rhonda

Liam Mcdaid October 8, 2013 at 2:24 PM it was like a dance came together really beautiful

Sara Kendrick October 8, 2013 at 7:39 AM Enjoyed reading your dancing lines..It soon will be full fledge fall here..Reads like a winner in the contest to me..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Kash Poet October 7, 2013 at 11:57 PM Love this Nette!Wonderful imagery in this poem!

Russell Sivey October 7, 2013 at 11:47 PM This is such a beautiful and exciting write to read my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! You sure do know how to please my senses by your perfectly placed words Nette! What a glorious piece, quite the delightful poem, Great Work!!