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A Season's Dance

Sultry afternoon zephyr moves Pacificator's calm Rallying in spring's blossoms' dance Inherit Hyacinth's balm Now dance Cherry blossom pink Glide 'pon zephyr's faint breeze Slip to the ground and rest in death Unite in summer's ease Move mighty oak branches~dance, groove Mighty summer storm blows Enjoy the strong breeze, clap and tap Rinsed, energized leaves glow Afternoons warm, cool autumn nights Unusually dry air Thrill to colorful leaves' tango Unified dancing pairs Moss is touched by ballerina Neat steps of burgundy Wisteria's yellow vines twist In step so artfully Nests are empty their numbers few Tapestry of white embossed Evergreens shake, snow waltzes down Remember dances lost Finis" Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle Contest: A Season's Dance Written: September 28, 2013 Poet: Sara Kendrick Poulter's measure:8,6,8,6 with rhyme only on the 6 The first letter of each line spells something

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Date: 10/23/2013 11:31:00 PM
I could smell the essence of the seasons while reading this one. From the spring blossoms, to the summer air, to the autumn nights, to the winter evergreens. A lovely poem, Sara! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind comments!
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Date: 10/23/2013 1:19:00 PM
lovely win Sara, .. LOVE --SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:08:00 PM
Sara, , a wonderful win in Gail's "Season's Dance " contest.... Always ~LINDA
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Date: 10/21/2013 12:42:00 PM
Lovely, Sara! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/20/2013 12:01:00 PM
Elegant beauty from beginning to end. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/20/2013 5:25:00 AM
Superb win!
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Date: 10/20/2013 5:22:00 AM
congrats on your win Sara
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Date: 10/19/2013 10:17:00 PM
Congratulations Sara. I have been wondering how you and yours are doing. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/19/2013 4:51:00 PM
you have penned a beautiful delight for all to read....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/29/2013 3:46:00 PM
Impressive work Sara.
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Date: 9/29/2013 3:26:00 PM
a winner Sara you have excelled totally love it Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/29/2013 1:13:00 PM
what a floating kind of sway this is, sara...i can imagine nature waltzing, tangoing, dancing... a visual art, indeed!.. amazing!:) huggs
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Date: 9/29/2013 6:55:00 AM
Excellent. Well crafted poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 9/28/2013 9:13:00 PM
What a clever poem! My poetry teacher wrote a whole book with the same technique. Fine work here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/28/2013 7:58:00 PM
This is superb, Sara....Wow...the cadence was amazing..Also...the acrostic...WOW! This is sure to do very well indeed. Hope all is well with you, my dear!!! HUGS!
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Date: 9/28/2013 3:12:00 PM
Your elegant writing scheme is only overshadowed by your clever Acrostic formations! You have delighted me by the splendor of this wonderful write my friend! I surely loved reading this delightful season inspired poem this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/28/2013 1:38:00 PM
very good Sara well written so far Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/28/2013 1:11:00 PM
Lovely Sara, love the twisting vine imagery...perfect from your pen so far... always~ Linda
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Date: 9/28/2013 11:52:00 AM
- Beautiful poem Sara. - Autumn in Norway , the sun shines on the beautiful colors. - and it is cold.- Luck in contest!!! - Have a nice weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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