A Season's Dance

Sultry afternoon zephyr moves
Pacificator's calm
Rallying in spring's blossoms' dance
Inherit Hyacinth's balm  

Now dance Cherry blossom pink
Glide 'pon zephyr's faint breeze
Slip to the ground and rest in death
Unite in summer's ease

Move mighty oak branches~dance, groove
Mighty summer storm blows
Enjoy the strong breeze, clap and tap
Rinsed, energized leaves glow

Afternoons warm, cool autumn nights
Unusually dry air
Thrill to colorful leaves' tango
Unified dancing pairs

Moss is touched by ballerina
Neat steps of burgundy
Wisteria's yellow vines twist
In step so artfully

Nests are empty their numbers few
Tapestry of white embossed
Evergreens shake, snow waltzes down
Remember dances lost




Finis"
Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle
Contest: A Season's Dance
Written: September 28, 2013
Poet: Sara Kendrick
Poulter's measure:8,6,8,6 with rhyme only on the 6
The first letter of each line spells something
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 11:31 PM
I could smell the essence of the seasons while reading this one. From the spring blossoms, to the summer air, to the autumn nights, to the winter evergreens. A lovely poem, Sara! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind comments!
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October 23, 2013 at 1:19 PM
lovely win Sara, .. LOVE --SKAT
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:08 PM
Sara, , a wonderful win in Gail's "Season's Dance " contest.... Always ~LINDA
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October 21, 2013 at 12:42 PM
Lovely, Sara! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda
Anglesey Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 12:01 PM
Elegant beauty from beginning to end. Congrats on your win :)
Sharma Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 5:25 AM
Superb win!
May Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 5:22 AM
congrats on your win Sara
Johnson Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 10:17 PM
Congratulations Sara. I have been wondering how you and yours are doing. Love, Joyce
Adams Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 4:51 PM
you have penned a beautiful delight for all to read....congrats on your win :)
Mohammed Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 3:46 PM
Impressive work Sara.
Hamilton Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 3:26 PM
a winner Sara you have excelled totally love it Shadow x smile
Onclaud Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 1:13 PM
what a floating kind of sway this is, sara...i can imagine nature waltzing, tangoing, dancing... a visual art, indeed!.. amazing!:) huggs
Sathasivam Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 6:55 AM
Excellent. Well crafted poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Anish Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 9:13 PM
What a clever poem! My poetry teacher wrote a whole book with the same technique. Fine work here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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September 28, 2013 at 7:58 PM
This is superb, Sara....Wow...the cadence was amazing..Also...the acrostic...WOW! This is sure to do very well indeed. Hope all is well with you, my dear!!! HUGS!
Sivey Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 3:12 PM
Your elegant writing scheme is only overshadowed by your clever Acrostic formations! You have delighted me by the splendor of this wonderful write my friend! I surely loved reading this delightful season inspired poem this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
Hamilton Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 1:38 PM
very good Sara well written so far Shadow x smile
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September 28, 2013 at 1:11 PM
Lovely Sara, love the twisting vine imagery...perfect from your pen so far... always~ Linda
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September 28, 2013 at 11:52 AM
- Beautiful poem Sara. - Autumn in Norway , the sun shines on the beautiful colors. - and it is cold.- Luck in contest!!! - Have a nice weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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