Notes About The Poem

This poem is inspired by the theme and form: Suzette Prime for my dear poet friend's contest (Suzette Crous)

A Seagull's Plight

a resilient soul
hoists his drooping wings
dreary but dreamy
soars far
so high
he keeps on searching for his illusive dreams
regardless of the storm and height of mountains
goes through miles away
in his equanimity
straight with vision of sunrays
on  plight are failures
not too bad
tries again
the mighty swords in his heart
so much patience and love help him to survive
in every  vicissitude and kinks of his life
oftentimes
we  can get the melody of what we want
if we  allow the cacophonies to come



Dec. 5, 2012

Form: Suzette Prime

First Place
Contest: Suzette Prime: Prime Numbers and Philosophy
Judged: 12/14/2012
Poet Sponsor: Suzette Crous
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Delaney Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 2:46 AM
You have such a talent, Len. of capturing emotions that our heart feel but cannot voice when we see a seagull It all there in each sweep of its wings. Brilliant poem. Hugs, SuZ
Harper Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 7:38 AM
Excellent philosophical poem about dreams, wonderful Leonora!
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 11:13 AM
Revisiting this one and I am seeing you WON. Awesome, and a belated congrats to you. I really should have tried this one out!!
Duncan Avatar
December 17, 2012 at 4:48 PM
WOW,,, I wrote one about seagull's back when I was 16, last century ;},,, not posted. I enjoyed the story . don't forget to have a blessed Christmas ;}
Haick Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 10:35 PM
Ah, you took me on a journey there, Leonora. Great imagery, lovely poem. Will read more. Happy Holidays! Always, Annalise
Grisetti Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 10:01 AM
I could feel the flight and wind on my wings. Thank you.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 9:37 AM
Way to go, I enjoyed this prime grade A piece of Poetry.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations on your top spot Leonora love xx
A   Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 9:02 PM
Hello Leo, my sweet sis-ie pooh... how are... I'm seeing an awesome win here... wish I understood this form... , congratulations in the "SUZETTE PRIME:" contest... :-) PD
Guzzi Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 6:33 PM
Congrad's on your win in this challenging form Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 6:04 PM
I especially like the last two lines..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Your time spent reading my work is appreciated..Sara
A   Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 10:01 PM
Hi Leo, are you around.. soup mail...pd
Horsman Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 10:40 AM
sheer classic poetry this, a wonderful rendering i enjoyed ever so much
Ober Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 7:32 AM
"Dreary but dreamy" - I love that. This is a wonderful write. Great job!!
Ndlovu Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 10:41 PM
Brilliant write with an exceptional theme. This one is a favourite!
A   Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 9:20 PM
Suzette, is going to love this my sis... cacophonies... is that a sound of something. never heard of the word... Leo, love the image,, wonder what they are really thinking... enjoyed... hope to hear from you soon,,, xox~pd
Gasun Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 7:54 AM
Thank you my sis and everyone here! Cacophonies means noisy and very loud sounds just like what you create when still trying to perfect your skills in musical instruments. Again, million thanks and good night. Sorry if I can't stay long here on soup because I'm still recovering from flu.
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 4:27 PM
wow, the way you summed up your idea in those last two lines. Wonderful lines, Leonora. I'm happy to see you posting this new poem!!
Guzzi Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 3:56 PM
You are a trooper I haven't tried the form yet sounds like awinner. Light & Love
Liwayway Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 10:06 AM
wow!! superb write indeed...You are truly a gifted poet my dear Norie...so creative...Good luck..anyway It s a sure winner for me...Good day!! hugs, Mary
Gildersleeve Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 7:18 AM
A beauty of expression Leonora. An exceptional write. Warm wishes, Connie
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 6:05 AM
A poem that heat completely into the heart, Leonora. - It's beautiful!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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