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A Sea Of Love

Swimming in tears of glee birth from water - my child I hold. Gently, carefully I cut her free. The skies open, rain streams of gold. In tears of glee my child I hold. Her mother immersed snugly  displays a glow. She flows, radiates. I hand her our daughter our baby. A sea of love opens the flood gates. Our daughter our baby she flows, radiates. Fluid are the feelings now fill me, rushes through me like a lifeline. We three, are now a family, like rivers to the ocean, we combine. Feelings now fill me, we combine. 01~22~2015 Sponsor: Craig Cornish Contest: Manassian Quintain

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Date: 4/8/2015 1:59:00 PM
I love your poetry even more when it's combined with the sea of love... LINDA
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Date: 2/22/2015 11:22:00 PM
Maurice.. Beautiful work my friend, congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:34:00 PM
Maurice, Congratulations in Craig's contest. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 2/18/2015 7:44:00 PM
Really beautiful...big congrats
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Date: 2/18/2015 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/18/2015 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful win. Janet
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Date: 2/17/2015 4:58:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Armand:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/14/2015 9:46:00 AM
Wow Maurice, this is amazing poetry, you bring one the reader right in to the poem, in fact want to be apart of it...
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Date: 2/6/2015 7:00:00 AM
You write graciously and wonderfully. Its blissful coming across this piece. There's nothing more than I can say other than, this is simply awesome and great
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Date: 2/5/2015 8:53:00 AM
As always, you capture the moment with your words, Armand. 7 Salutes from the land of thousand isles.. :D Kim.
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Date: 1/28/2015 4:44:00 PM
In my work I see this moment daily, yet it still brings tears to me eyes. It is so wonderful.....for you Armand I can feel the overwhelming sensation within you.....Seren
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Date: 1/25/2015 7:59:00 AM
aww. This was real nice. A perfect moment. :) Hugxxx
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Date: 1/24/2015 12:17:00 AM
wow, you did an amazing job with this challenge. I see you used people and symbolism with water such as I did with mine. I really enjoyed how you did your entry, ARmand. This poetry form is really nice, isn't it? I can't say I have seen one bad poem in this contest. Bet your does very well. You are sure busy with poetry lately. and you seem to be waxing nostalgic about your daughters. What an amazing dad you are!
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Date: 1/23/2015 2:24:00 PM
Such a wonderful flow to the poem Armand - i can't get my head around this form lol:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/22/2015 1:53:00 PM
Beautiful my friend...cheers
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Date: 1/22/2015 11:30:00 AM
Love your take on the contest topic... best wishes, nad!
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Date: 1/22/2015 10:04:00 AM
I cannot get my head around this form..Seems you did! Good one, I will study yours and hope for inspiration. BG
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Date: 1/22/2015 9:21:00 AM
This is truly one of the best I have read! Shall I congratulate you now?
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