A Scolding From My Muse

For Miranda Lambert’s “Inspired” contest
By Carolyn Devonshire


I wanted to write for this contest;
But my muse was staging a protest.
     “Take me to the sea,” it pled,
     “In this house, I languish, dead;
Put me in touch with nature, a forest.”

“Don’t stare at a screen, confined by walls;
Locked inside, my inspiration falls.
     Surely there’s a babbling brook
     Or a valley’s overlook.
Give me something to work with,” muse calls.

“If you fail to respond, I’ll attack
As you’re sleeping in a room black.
     Thoughts you will never recall
     Cannot upon your page fall;
Without me you’re nothing but a hack!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 9:09 PM
Love limericks Carolyn and this is great.
Guzzi Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:40 PM
UT OH! tough muse! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Jarvis Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 8:53 PM
Love it..SO creative are you..Congrats on the win..
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 7:50 PM
a big congrats for this one. probably one of the funniest, Carolyn.
Kendrick Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 5:00 PM
Creative ....Congrats..Sara
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on your win in Miranda's "Inspired" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Muzzey Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Susan Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 7:30 AM
I love this! Congratulations on your win! So clever!
Mehta Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 6:14 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of Miranda, Carolyn
Long Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 8:18 PM
congrats on your win in the contest. cory
Neels Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 1:07 PM
Your muse is quite busy hey?? You had me smiling with these series of limerick Carolyn, all the best for the contest, love wilma
Maverick Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 1:01 PM
Enyoyed the way you describe your work with inspiration of your muse, Carolyn.. glad i checked your work out, am thinking of you.!
Wesley Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 11:43 AM
Sometimes the fuse can light the muse eh Caolyn - great thoughts on the intricisies of writing.
Austin Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 10:56 AM
Of the muse you must keep track or become nothing but a hack. Poetry by Austinfellow. Now don't ya be scolding. I really dig your poem. Hope you are doing better with the health problem. Love, daver
Knop Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 3:52 AM
Best of luck in Miranda's contest with this nicely penned contribution, dear Carolyn! I hope that you'll enjoy an relaxing weekend!...Love, Gert
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June 24, 2011 at 6:47 PM
You are hardly a hack. You are beatiful and talented. I hope that you are feelinf well! Send me Soup Mail! My best always! I have been both real busy and real distracted. Love, Gerard!
Horne Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 2:30 PM
LOL, hope you obliged your muse and took her somewhere she enjoyed : )
Foulk Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 12:44 PM
wonderful write, enjoyed this one good luck in contest.
M V Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 10:47 AM
Wonderful! I enjoyed your conflict with Muse.It's quite exceptional,dear friend
Mister Roboto Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 12:16 AM
When booty calls...ANSWER! Nice piece and You are soo cool for leaving me such uplifting comments! I am glad you like my liddle riddles! Viagra Falls Calls, Now run...or should I say SAIL away and look out below!
Austin Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 1:40 PM
Yes. I sometimes feel that I'm shut-in, but there is a window looking out into a garden. I like your muse. LOve, Dave
Ball Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 10:40 AM
Too cute my friend. Been there and done that. If you have time check out my, "THE WOULD BE POET" Really got a boot out of this one. God Bless, JB
K. Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 10:04 AM
Enjoyed reading this one, Carolyn :) Very cute approach you did with your entry! But I just bet your muse is mighty happy with what you came up with here ;) hugs
Poet Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 7:27 AM
Wonderful approach to do the contest Carolyn.Enjoyed.Best wishes.
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 11:20 PM
It's such fun to write of one's muse, particularly when they go AWOL on ya. Good luck with the contest with your cute set of limericks. Our minds think alike. I did three too!
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