Notes About The Poem
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Poetic Form: Tanka
Inspired: 2024 July 04
Image: Our Family Album
a scene in their eyes
my kids once called me
the walking problem solver
~ I am the problem
they are to resolve ~ failure
I lose ~ objectives they win
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