Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

A Savored Kiss

He warmed me as the sun when nights were cold
I was his moon, hair cascading in curls of gold
Lovers bound as one with yearning and need
With a hunger so powerful, it bordered on greed

I longed to savor his kiss and moistened my lips
We coupled together; sun and moon in eclispse
Desire not yet sated, I softly whispered a plea
"More deeply this time, my love, I beg of thee"


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Mark Koplin July 24, 2020 at 12:41 PM wow did that get steamy!! This is beautiful.

Kai Michael Neumann January 3, 2020 at 6:09 AM What a kiss. Deep, passionate and forthcoming. Nice one. Happy New Year, Kai Lin Lane January 5, 2020 at 5:51 AM It took a decided turn to being more passionate than originally intended, but sometimes love takes control. Thanks, Kai.

Jan Allison December 29, 2019 at 7:16 PM ooh err Lin a passionate piece indeed!:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane January 5, 2020 at 5:50 AM Thank you, Jan.

Gregory Richard Barden December 28, 2019 at 5:31 PM John is correct - another gem! Kissing is my favorite thing to do ... kissing in moonlight? The ultimate! Love it - blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3 Lin Lane January 5, 2020 at 5:49 AM Thank you for your kind words, Greg. They're appreciated.

Line Gauthier December 25, 2019 at 9:26 AM Lovely, Lin. Merry Christmas! Best wishes to you and your loved ones for 2020. Lin Lane January 5, 2020 at 5:49 AM Thanks for the comments and well wishes, Line.

Quoth Theraven December 22, 2019 at 2:02 AM Lin, The time has come for poem 'A Savored Kiss'. So glad your moon wasn't lost, nor missed. -Richard Lin Lane December 22, 2019 at 4:15 AM Thanks so very much for such sweet words, Richard.

John Hamilton December 21, 2019 at 6:39 PM Another gem from you Lin, enjoyed! Lin Lane December 22, 2019 at 4:15 AM Thank you ever so much, J.D, for another welcome comment.

Gordon Mcconnell December 21, 2019 at 3:38 PM Such a lovely romantic write Lin, nice penning with good imagery too! Lin Lane December 21, 2019 at 4:17 PM Hi, Gordon. I'm so happy you could envision the scene. It certainly adds to the imagery. Thanks for reading and leaving kind comments.

Chris Green December 20, 2019 at 4:53 PM Now that is what a kiss should feel like. So beautifully written Lin, this is passionate and warm and perfectly expressed. Lin Lane December 20, 2019 at 5:11 PM Thanks ever so much, Chris. Slow kisses are sensual to me.