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A Savored Kiss

He warmed me as the sun when nights were cold I was his moon, hair cascading in curls of gold Lovers bound as one with yearning and need With a hunger so powerful, it bordered on greed I longed to savor his kiss and moistened my lips We coupled together; sun and moon in eclispse Desire not yet sated, I softly whispered a plea "More deeply this time, my love, I beg of thee" ~ Not entered in a contest ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/24/2020 12:41:00 PM
wow did that get steamy!! This is beautiful.
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Date: 1/3/2020 6:09:00 AM
What a kiss. Deep, passionate and forthcoming. Nice one. Happy New Year, Kai
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2020 5:51:00 AM
It took a decided turn to being more passionate than originally intended, but sometimes love takes control. Thanks, Kai.
Date: 12/29/2019 7:16:00 PM
ooh err Lin a passionate piece indeed!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2020 5:50:00 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Date: 12/28/2019 5:31:00 PM
John is correct - another gem! Kissing is my favorite thing to do ... kissing in moonlight? The ultimate! Love it - blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2020 5:49:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Greg. They're appreciated.
Date: 12/25/2019 9:26:00 AM
Lovely, Lin. Merry Christmas! Best wishes to you and your loved ones for 2020.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2020 5:49:00 AM
Thanks for the comments and well wishes, Line.
Date: 12/22/2019 2:02:00 AM
Lin, The time has come for poem 'A Savored Kiss'. So glad your moon wasn't lost, nor missed. -Richard
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/22/2019 4:15:00 AM
Thanks so very much for such sweet words, Richard.
Date: 12/21/2019 6:39:00 PM
Another gem from you Lin, enjoyed!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/22/2019 4:15:00 AM
Thank you ever so much, J.D, for another welcome comment.
Date: 12/21/2019 3:38:00 PM
Such a lovely romantic write Lin, nice penning with good imagery too!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/21/2019 4:17:00 PM
Hi, Gordon. I'm so happy you could envision the scene. It certainly adds to the imagery. Thanks for reading and leaving kind comments.
Date: 12/20/2019 4:53:00 PM
Now that is what a kiss should feel like. So beautifully written Lin, this is passionate and warm and perfectly expressed.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/20/2019 5:11:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, Chris. Slow kisses are sensual to me.

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