Get Your Premium Membership

A Sanctuary of Serenity and Security - Win

A Sanctuary of Serenity and Security I know everyone loves the soup But it is to be followed by a dinner Where are the varieties of my poetic group Trying to find them scrolling” Poems-New” ever. Where’s Carolyn, I heard, Growing Green Again A classy, gentle, and sweet lady Linda, soup’s flavor While the Sun God spreading the light over the domain I remember you spreading light on the soup ever. Oh there! Carrie, Andrea, nette, Debbie, Joyce and Sara Kendrick Craig, Richard, Giorgio, Jimbo and harry never to be missed The humor of Don, Shar and Char, C.L. and Bob Hinslaw quite quick Constance, Wilma, Judy and Joe, scarcely seen but today not missed. Happy to see you all after an absence of two years One and all, new and old, ever green P.D. accept my cheers. Oh, Yasmin, where is my special dish of Kichdi-curry. After the soup, can’t wait more , I’m much hungry.
+++++++ Date 30-10-13 Dr. Ram Mehta First Place win in Contest by Yasmin Khan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/8/2013 11:03:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2013 9:18:00 PM
amazing.... poem.... Congrats on your Meeting The Soup poets win........ LOVE ~SKAT~
Login to Reply
Date: 11/5/2013 11:34:00 PM
wonderful win.... Luv~ LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 11/4/2013 5:46:00 AM
Beautiful poem Mr Ram ~V~
Login to Reply
Date: 11/2/2013 7:42:00 PM
this is really cute, Dr. Ram. Our dear Linda, I fear something bad has happened because she was mentioning diabetes problems and then we did not hear from her any more. that was a year ago. I always wonder if she is ok but she won't answer.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/2/2013 5:16:00 PM
True flamboyance Go Ram go. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 11/2/2013 2:42:00 PM
nicely penned...congrats on your win :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/2/2013 1:35:00 PM
Congrats, Dr. Mehta! This such a big celebration we want to be with! Nice to meet you here! Bless you my Souper-Friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
Login to Reply
Date: 11/2/2013 12:33:00 PM
Congrats Dr Ram I missed the contest but have one I want to post Soon. SuZ
Login to Reply
Date: 11/2/2013 10:35:00 AM
Your party sounds like a celebration that we will never forget.....I can't wait to share such a great time with such good friends as these!! Well done, Dr. Ram!!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/1/2013 9:42:00 AM
I love it Dr. Ram. I am also a fan of curry!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/30/2013 6:17:00 PM
great write
Login to Reply
Date: 10/30/2013 9:59:00 AM
A very sweet dedication here. :) Nice one!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/30/2013 9:41:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Soup is a mixture of characters who form a nonclassical vegetable soup..Thanks for the visit to my page and thanks for including my name in your work..Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs