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A Sailor's Day

The first man off the ship in Subic Bay Happy ambling off with a sailor’s pay Found a hooker in a bar; Lots of liquor took him far Was broke and happy at the end of day. written July 2, 2021

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/6/2021 5:14:00 PM

Hello Milton … being happy and broke is the only way to go for some - thanks Milton - Lindsay

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/6/2021 6:42:00 PM

I'd say you're probably right about that, Lindsay, although I never could be happy if I were broke!

Charles Messina

Date: 7/3/2021 4:36:00 AM

Being at sea for a long period can cause a man to go on the prowl for sure...one should make sure he fills his pockets with confetti before he does. happy endings usually ends up with empty pockets when it comes to hookers. Fun Limerick, Milton

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/3/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thanks, Charles. That is soooo true, especially in the shipping ports where all they are after is the sailor's pay.

Terry Flood

Date: 7/2/2021 5:33:00 PM

Fun write, Milt. I used to walk through London’s Soho (red light district) to get my train home (yes, really). One evening I was asked by a ‘lady’ in a doorway, ‘you looking for business?’ I said ‘no thanks’ and walked on. In the next doorway, obviously being pimped, was the most beautiful girl I had ever seen. I maintained my stride and caught my train... but she sure was gorgeous. I hope she got free. Terry

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/2/2021 7:09:00 PM

Thanks for the read and the fantastic comment, Terry. You've kept it right in tune!

Anselmo Boles

Date: 7/2/2021 2:38:00 PM

I actually have friends that fit this guys description and have his disposition! This one's quiet funny and clever Milton!!...ab

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/2/2021 7:12:00 PM

Thanks, Anselmo. I thought you might enjoy it because I know you enjoy the ocean!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/2/2021 11:15:00 AM

Those hookers are quite expensive, so I'm told lol. Enjoy your weekend Milton. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/2/2021 12:05:00 PM

Well, at least he was happy! I suspect it was the next morning, however, as opposed to the end of the day!