A Sad Song Blithely Sung

As if pain could no longer hurt, 
she sings of love embezzled by loveless men. 
As if with a drought in her eyes, 
she echoes a memory of tears. 
As if melancholy were an old friend, 
she confides dreams unrepentant. 

Her voice, scarred by sighs 
and the consolation of narcotics’ embrace,
wavers and cracks when she sings, 
and the cracks are fault lines,
sending forth shudders of 
rapture and fracture, illusion and disillusion,
in an ecstasy of heartache that 
rends the air and desolates the night
long after the song is done.  

But across her voice also stretches an indigo sky
in which the stars are not stars, 
but embers hung up high, 
beyond the reach of the 
highest tides of disenchantment, 
ever wistful with a last glimmer of hope.      

As if the only thing that could still surprise her
were, at long last, happiness, 
as if life couldn’t fool her again with its 
false promise of amaranths, 
she serenades the heart’s vagaries,  
and offers up a cluster of weary smiles in
a sad song blithely sung.

- inspired by Billie Holiday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/22/2017 6:53:00 PM
Wow Bernard, this is a superlative write. You handled this subject matter deftly with your wonderfully skilled and artistic pen. You superbly captured the alluring essence of Billie Holiday with your lyrical and lovely imagery.. A shining poem, but your third stanza is an especially brilliant one. Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan
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Date: 12/22/2017 7:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Susan! Happy holidays to you and your family :)
Date: 12/13/2017 10:17:00 AM
Bernard, your pen is on fire. Incredible pen! Fave :) xomo!
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Bernard Chan
Date: 12/13/2017 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen. You're too kind :)
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