A Sad Old Flea

A sad old flea and a silly old gnat
were boogieing it down
on the neck of an aristocrat
When suddenly Splat
they're flat
And that was that
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 21, 2016 at 10:09 PM
LOL, I don't feel bad for either one. Donald... Splat, spalt, :) haha. XOOL. Limerick.. lINDA
Bennett Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 12:04 AM
thanks Linda.
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November 21, 2013 at 8:32 PM
very very cute and well written, and thank you for the visit to my words and for leaving yours behind
Duncan Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 10:28 PM
right on,,, I like the way it flows,,,, blessings ;}
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