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A Rush of False Bravado

Feeling a rush of false bravado though uninvited I pitched a tent deep in your mind there were many beautiful things but the price was a menacing beast. There were ruby throated hummers meadow and flower surrounded by streams but always just behind was the tapping hooves of that menacing beast I was enchanted -thought of staying forever but the perils were a little to much pulling up stakes-leaving your mind just as I'd entered, in a false bravado rush.

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Date: 3/11/2019 10:42:00 AM
Wow! Fantastic write. I can feel the emotion of your write! A fave
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Date: 3/10/2019 9:47:00 PM
Metaphoric Masterpiece, Maestro!
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Date: 3/10/2019 7:24:00 PM
I am awed by this metaphor! I am sure there are many people who have a beast lurking in a beautiful mind.
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Date: 3/10/2019 5:59:00 PM
thought provoking lines... fools rush in where angels fear to tread springs to mind Anthony! hugs Jan
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