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A Rush of Emotions

She sat beside the waterfall
where gushing thoughts cascade,
like tears that flowed along her cheeks,
her heart set to invade.

He left alone for pastures new.
A scribbled note in haste
he wrote then fled, as cowards do,
her heart a barren waste.

A lightning bolt out of the blue
that pierced her heart; she bled.
Much later on the ache still hurt;
her feeble wings unspread.
 
She dared not heed the tumbling sound
as water crashed on rocks.
How fit to let death end the pain!
She started down the walk.

But just before the water’s edge
a voice called out, “Be Ware!
The road you walk is treacherous;
for God’s sake, stand right there!”

He turned her round, and saw her face
spill tears upon her gown.
He whispered in her windswept hair
“One misstep and you’ll drown.”

“Please, let me go, you do not know
what burns here in my breast.
I need to douse these flames and find
my sweet eternal rest.”

She struggled then against his arms,
the longed for end so near,
and yet he held with all his might,
spoke words to still her fear.

And when all limp she leaned on him,
this man she did not know,
he soothed her as he said these words:
“I will not let you go.”

Drained of resolve she let him lead
from rock to lush verdure,
as reassurance kindled trust,
his hand was firm, secure.

They sat beneath a shady tree.
Engrossed, they talked at length,
and in the process she revealed
his presence gave her strength.

He held her hands, looked in her eyes,
his heart worn on his sleeve
as they agreed to meet again
before she had to leave.
 
She touched his face, with gentle grace,
leaned in to kiss his cheek;
her lips just trembled there a while
enough to make him weak.

“You’ve saved my life, and now I owe
the greatest debt to you.
When next we meet, after we greet,
I’ll give you what’s your due.”

He smiled into her upturned eyes
and said these simple words:
“I’ve been repaid with sweetest kiss
my heart and soul you’ve stirred.

We’ll meet again, and when we do
you will forget the past
for then, my dear, I’ll make a vow
of love that’s sure to last.”

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(Paul Callus & Eileen Manassian ~ Sept 2019)
(A Callman Collaboration)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Crabtree Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 8:02 PM
I believe Divine intervention saved her life. :)
Callus Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 11:12 AM
I believe so, too, Angela....her guardian angel, perhaps...! Regards // paul
Manassian Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 12:24 PM
Ah.. so sweet to read this again. I must admit... you outshine me. I'd love to publish with you, Paul. Think about it...
Callus Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 4:59 PM
Thank you dear Eileen, though I beg to differ...I do not outshine; we row in tandem and in rhythm:) As to publishing, I'm all in favour, as long as my muse gives me a helping hand! Goodnight and hugs // paul
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November 6, 2019 at 6:15 PM
Paul and Eileen, you guys rock. A touching story of love and kindness. Wonderful poem. Hugs
Callus Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 11:06 AM
Many thanks to you, Cecilia. Your feedback is much appreciated by us both. Hugs // paul
Ball Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 12:01 PM
Paul this is so wonderful. You and Eileen work well together. Beautifully worded with perfect rhyme and rhythm. Wonderful imagery. The words flowed like honey. Bravo. God Bless, JB
Callus Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Thank you for stopping by with such lovely comments, Judy! Pointing out rhyme, rhythm and flow means a lot to us, as we give it due importance. Regards & Blessings // paul
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Wonderful collaborative poetry, Paul & Eileen. This ink gem was beautifully told. I love a happy ending. Loving smiles and smiles of joy always.
Callus Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 9:08 AM
Thank you, Freddie. Eileen and I work beautifully together. Pleased that you enjoyed. Best regards // paul
Hamilton Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 7:19 PM
This is a classic write, like a Harlequin romance novel (not that I've ever read one you know) nicely done, a perfect collaboration!!
Callus Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 10:18 AM
That is quite a compliment, John. Thank you. I hope we managed to bring a tear to our female readers' eyes:) Best regards // paul
Chiri Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 3:40 PM
Wow this was beyond amazing! Made me a bit weepy lo! Emotions not worth much now days but a cry baby in my old age! I felt this to my core! What can I say but bravo! Simply amazing makes thinksye one day!;)
Callus Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 10:16 AM
I agree with you, Brenda...the older we get the more emotional we seem to become! So pleased that we managed to pull on your heart strings:) Thank you for such a pleasant visit. Enjoy the weekend, my friend. // paul
Proxenos Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 1:10 PM
A beautiful collaboration - congratulations to you my friend and Eileen. Hugs Jenny.
Callus Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 10:13 AM
In answer to both your comments, Jenny...a big thank you from both of us; your lovely comments mean a lot to us. Warm regards & hugs // paul
Proxenos Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 1:08 PM
What a wonderful, touching love story Paul, almost like a fairy tale when the prince arrives and saves a princess and they fall in love - I so enjoyed this awesome poem, my type of poetry, well penned my friend. Warm regards and hugs, Jenny.
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September 29, 2019 at 3:47 PM
You took my breath with so captivating and sweet a story! An adept pen along with a vivid imagination a great poem is woven! A huge WOW for its striking beauty! A great pleasure to read your work, Paul, in collaboration with Eileen! Into my fave list.. My warmest wishes and regards. Blessings.
Callus Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 10:10 AM
Your feedback and complimentary remarks are music to the ears, Besma...so is the fav! Writing with Eileen comes easy. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Warm regards & blessings // paul
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September 29, 2019 at 11:58 AM
A wonderful poem, Paul.Adore the drama in this. And to Eileen, you both write well together Panagiota
Callus Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 10:06 AM
That is such a lovely compliment, Panagiota...thank you! Regards // paul
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September 28, 2019 at 4:58 AM
I was thinking - now I know I read this and commented, but it was on Eileen's post - LOL... This is a awesome write. Prayers for many more. Blessings
Callus Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 10:05 AM
Thank you for reading both Eileen's and my poem, Regina; that is so kind of you...and the 'awesome' comment is so much appreciated. Blessings // paul
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September 27, 2019 at 3:00 PM
What a beautiful love story you have penned together, Paul and Eileen. When good Samaritans enter our lives, we have been blessed. This poem leaves me thinking they will find that true love together. Awesome collaboration! Hugs, Carolyn (a fave)
Callus Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 10:03 AM
Thank you for the lovely comments and feedback...and the fav, Carolyn. Excuse the late reply..life is keeping me extra busy! Keep well. Hugs // paul
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September 27, 2019 at 1:33 PM
Hello Paul Callus, I would like to have a love like that some day. have a nice day my friend. Regards Darlene
Callus Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 4:48 PM
Such a love could be awaiting just round the corner, Darlene! Enjoy the rest of the day. Regards // paul
Horne Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 9:08 AM
what a lovely collaboration
Callus Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 4:46 PM
Thank you, Jack. Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:11 PM
A great story..I enjoyed the turn in your poem--happy ending. Kudos to you Paul and Eileen.
Callus Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:34 PM
So pleased you enjoyed it, Vijay; thank you. Regards // paul
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 3:57 PM
This is outstanding. A beautiful poem you both have written! :)
Callus Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:24 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Your comments are appreciated. Regards // paul
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 2:47 PM
two of the finest poets working in perfect harmony - an epic poem Bravo Paul and Eileen:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:23 PM
You are too kind, Jan :) Thank you from both of us. Hugs // paul
Green Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 2:20 PM
I started reading this and thought, I have seen this someplace before and then it dawned on me, I read the one Eileen posted this morning. But that's ok, it was beautiful enough to read twice. Really nicely done Paul.
Callus Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:21 PM
I am glad that you read both posts, Chris. I hope that those who read mine will in turn go and read Eileen's. Thank you for stopping by, my friend. Regards // paul
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