A Running Heart and Soul

by Michael J Falotico

                                                  curtain covered heart.
                                                 slowly opened to a light.
                                                love comes in and warms.

                                                  locked window to soul.
                                                opened latches to create.
                                                heart and soul now write.

                                                     a man lies asleep.
                                              while dreams awaken inside
                                                   I now run with words.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/21/2011 7:04:00 AM
This is simple yet meaningful... Thanx for stopping by, Michael :D
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Date: 5/23/2011 3:22:00 PM
A heart and soul alive again.. how beautiful :)
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Date: 5/12/2011 5:01:00 AM
Beautiful love the last verse !
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Date: 5/9/2011 6:42:00 AM
Hey precious one... sunrise in Italy is so awesomely beautiful... wishing u were here too with lady fair.. warm and sunny day luv..so far... cannot sleep..too much to do ..to write..to create.. hope u enjoyed along with Moms.. a lovely M.D. and your Jersey Girl is always thinking of her White Knight.. with luv..
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Date: 5/8/2011 5:41:00 AM
thankxx for your precious words Michael.. and for the H.M.D. wishes too.. flying high still on this uneasy flight so my fingers were busy all night and even now... oh.. cannot wait to plant my feet on the ground .. wishing u a pleasant day with your own lovely Mom... Jersey Girl forever with luv..
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Date: 5/7/2011 10:51:00 PM
It must be an awesome feeling to run with word hey Michael? An inspiring write, hope your Sunday will be a great one.. Ps: give your mom a hug from the crazy CT girl ;) love Wilma
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Date: 5/7/2011 9:11:00 PM
Flying high in the sky ..flying high reading your poetry in flight to keep my mind off elevation luv... super words ..again my White Knight.. your Jersey Girl in cloud mode...luv..
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Date: 5/7/2011 8:07:00 PM
* “Lovely” * my first thought at conclusions ending of this * “Tranquilities Blue Sea Verse” * was of a child joyfully flying their kite * running amid the flower made meadows * while as the sun smiled its warmth upon their precious heart * “Very Beautiful Gifted Michael * A Fave As Yourself * Beyond The Window Pane Sooo Bright * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah
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Date: 5/7/2011 6:23:00 PM
Just a beautiful write Michael, what can I say awesome! Love Alexa
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Date: 5/7/2011 3:48:00 PM
I especially like the last one and the last line..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the blog visit..The puppy is running and playing like a year old child..It is entertaining..Sara
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Date: 5/7/2011 1:33:00 PM
Perhaps I need to pull the curtain back so this light can enter my heart as well, Michael. I especially love the last verse -- dreams wake you and you "run with words." That is how I picture you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/7/2011 1:18:00 PM
Thank you Michael, and your first 3 lines have a lot to do with the poem i just posted... well not the way you mean it..lol.. but i can make my own meaning to them lines... such as , my heart hiding always... slowly the thought of seeing... fills my heart with believeing... p.s. they are all great... Michael.. and so are you.. I also hope you enjoy your day tomorrow with Rosanna... take care.. always...p.d. ((( lets just say it was a big o' typo ))) lol
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Date: 5/7/2011 10:29:00 AM
Excellent write,Michael..
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Date: 5/7/2011 9:03:00 AM
Beautiful sentiments as always Michael.. precious parallels of luv from deep within.. always enjoy your breathtaking writes..luv.. appreciate the M.D. luv too ...my sons are taking me out this afternoon for lunch and fun ... since we are leaving tonight ... appreciate your sweet wishes ..Jersey Girl in Italy mode..luv.. same M.D. wishes to your Mom and Roseanna's Mom whom I hope is doing much better now..
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Date: 5/7/2011 8:59:00 AM
I can't imagine you ever with a curtained heart......it is too filled with emotion and beauty to be contained :) Lovely Senryu, Michael !
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Date: 5/7/2011 8:40:00 AM
My friend you never displease luv sarahx
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Date: 5/7/2011 8:40:00 AM
My friend you never displease luv sarahx
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Date: 5/7/2011 6:43:00 AM
Just beautiful Michael, I love that line "curtain covered heart" and you know I love dreamy poems~~
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Date: 5/7/2011 4:48:00 AM
A smooth write Michael. A lovely poem :o)
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