A Rose For the Thorn

She planted roses
for my deathbed
and spit in my coffee.

Poured vinegar
into this heart
on my sleeve.

I held her up
in a high place while
she mocked.

Plotted and planned
when no one was around
to defend.

Controlled the mark
that sustained
life.

Every hour
belonged to
her.

Come
or go...
her decision.

Voodoo
and spaghetti
at my vigil.

Melted candles
smothered by
by dirt.

This light of mine,
snuffed out
by deception.

Victory
dancing on my
grave.

I dug
this hole for
myself.

The thorn
in her
flesh.



Berteena
Harmony of the Soul
10 February, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 2/11/2019 11:15:00 PM
Life never promises a rose garden, but its thorn every minute... Fill that hole with more love... Nicely done.
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Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/12/2019 6:38:00 PM
Have not love, I am nothing. <3 Thank you, Pashang
Date: 2/10/2019 10:25:00 PM
Intriguing ink...piercing … and welcome to the Soup! :) gw
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Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/12/2019 6:23:00 PM
I'm so happy this poem resinated with you. Thank you kindly. ;)
Date: 2/10/2019 5:17:00 PM
Had read another poem from Horn; We knew bright new poet was born; Would see dirt, Humor and hurt; A crown with thorn Jesus had worn.
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Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/12/2019 6:36:00 PM
All the best of dark and bright, like the stars of the night. 'Tis GRACE that makes one's heart right. Grace sufficient for peace shedding light.
Date: 2/10/2019 12:05:00 PM
My soul is liking this a bunch. Your free verse made me smile, in its delightfulness!
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Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/10/2019 5:17:00 PM
Your soul is very kind and I adore you. <3
Date: 2/10/2019 9:26:00 AM
Many times in life we are deceived by the ones we love, and sometimes it scares us for life. Nicely written Berteena.
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Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/10/2019 5:14:00 PM
Tit tat. Tip tap. No loss. Such is life. Thank you, John.
Date: 2/10/2019 8:01:00 AM
Sounds like an awful person who took advantage of you.. sometimes we do not see those who stab daggers into our back.. you described it very poetically..
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Berteena Harmony Of The Soul
Date: 2/10/2019 5:09:00 PM
Can't vent, but I can write a poem. ;) Thank you, Silent One.
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