Premiere Contest WinnerA Rose For Rita

Here’s to the travellers,
   the passengers, the tourists
who trek this alien landscape
   in search of experience.

Here’s to the resilient,
   the adaptable, the survivors
who chose uneven ground
   and made a path for others.

Here’s to the dreamers,
   the poets, the believers
who see the cosmic cycles
   of life, death and rebirth.

Here’s to the family,
   the siblings, the bonds
that protect and comfort
   because love is never lost.

Here’s a rose for Rita,
   for Les, for Reen, for Mom
and all the souls we’ve lost
   who have gone home again.

For we are the aliens,
   not of this Earth, interlopers,
we belong to eternity
   and to eternity we shall return.

NOTE:
     Last night, Aug 20, 2019 my sister Rita Rose (her married name) lost her battle with leukemia and kidney disease, passing behind the curtain peacefully, joyfully returning to her husband Les whom she lost just nine months ago. Our mother passed only two months ago at the age of 92 while my brother's wife Reen died in April of 2018. Please send your love to Rita's daughter Heather and her grandchildren.
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Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 6:27 PM
Experiencing two deaths within six months I hug this poem too. Congratulations, Phil! I love the title!
Alex Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 7:50 AM
"we are the aliens, not of this Earth, interlopers" - Great! Congratulations!
Lawrence Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 7:00 AM
..... so revealing ... so much intelligence and heart and soul in this beautiful poem . I am adding it to my FAVS so I can read it again and again . You touched my heart as I know you have touched many others . Belated congratulations on your first place win . Blessings to you and yours , Susan
Deo Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 10:45 PM
To Heather, CHRISTmas consolations (Like Him upon the Cross, at Christmas, he was born to die) "We are aliens on earth, as much as Jesus was. Phil, U are salt and light (Matthew 5)
Capitano Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Anil for your compassion and support. Have a great day.
Aristy Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 5:50 AM
I will come here many times to read again the most beautiful and moving poem about love and faith. Prayers. Congratulations, Phil!
Capitano Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 7:11 AM
Thanks Roxane for the kind comments, I appreciate it.
Romios Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 4:17 AM
First place and many gold stars. To remark "welldone" is not enough. You touched many hearts with this. A FAVe! Par excellance! Panagiota
Lamoureux Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 9:05 AM
Giving this one a second read. A very moving write. A prayer headed your way.
Papyrus Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 9:47 AM
Exceptional write. Congratulations on your placement, it's a definitive win. The ending is hopeful!
There Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 12:01 AM
So sorry to hear of your losses. My condolences to you and your family. A beautiful poem expressing love and appreciation for all of us doing our best with the time we have here. Until the grand homecoming... Peace, Phil <3
Capitano Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 3:53 AM
Thanks for your sympathy, I appreciate the visit and comments from everyone. It helps to know there are others who give. Namaste.
Callus Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 4:48 AM
A touching poem which many of us can relate to, Phil. So sorry about your sister's passing away; I am sure that she is now free of worldly pain, enjoying greener pastures. I offer my prayers to you and her family. Regards // paul
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 6:04 PM
Hello Phil,Heather and grand children Rita will be with you in your hearts and thoughts og happiness that you all shared with her. have a nice day my friend.
Adams Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 9:48 PM
So sorry for all your losses. I too have lost too many family members to count but your words are beautifully penned and comforting to all who read! Congrats on your well deserved win and prayers for you, Heather and all the children! Hugs
Laur Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 9:08 AM
Reading your poem brought tears to my eyes. I am deeply moved.
Rose  Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 7:59 PM
So sorry to hear of your loss dear Phil. My prayers are with you and the family .
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 3:54 PM
A lovely write and tribute! Sounds like a lovely Rose. Sorry for your losses. Keep my cousin in prayer too. She also has leukemia.
Laur Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 10:49 AM
Made me cry
Mcgee Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 7:09 PM
With heartfelt congratulations on your first place. Best Wishes always with your poetry.
Green Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 2:42 PM
I can see why this emotional and heart touching piece wow'd Nina. Sadly the pain and loss is deeply felt. Congrats on your win!!!
Capitano Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 2:41 PM
Thanks to all who commented on this poem, the win is bittersweet but I do appreciate all your love and blessings. My heart swells at the outpourings of affection.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 8:36 AM
My sympathies for your loss Phil. I will keep Rita and your family in my prayers. I saved your beautiful poem to my Faves. Congratulations on your trophy win my friend! Blessings, Connie xxoo
Warrior Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 7:33 AM
My deepest condolences my friend...so much tragedy in a short period of time...lovingly expressed in your verse Phil...and congrats! on your trophy win my friend...^WW^
Lamoureux Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 9:01 PM
Sorry for your loss. A deserving top placement.
Sands Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 6:38 PM
Congratulations for your top win! A very loving tribute! :)
Kereopa Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 5:10 PM
Congratulations on your WOW win. Lovely tribute to family, my condolences.
Awtry Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 3:37 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful poem's honors in Nina's contest. Definitely a Wow...and a FAV for me. Many Blessings.
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