Speaks Volumes Poet Free verse

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A rose by another name-1288

Warm chair
Hot seat

Phosphorus on a stick
Match maker

Rocking chair on wheels
Rock n roller

Stretch musicians
Elastic band

Scissors 
cutting edge

Encore
Repeat performance

Oil painting
Slippery brushstrokes

Damaged incarseration
Jail break

Thumbs up 
Digital direction

Tangled hair 
Pain to bear

Wax creator
Candle maker

Pepper spread
Sneeze ahead

Beautiful parrot
Pretty poly

Man creating breeze
Fan mail

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Sotto Poet February 23, 2024 at 1:11 PM Dear SVThis piece is undeniably magnificent, truly exceptional. It conjures a surreal impression and atmosphere that enthralls the reader. I am particularly enamored with your use of free verse, a sentiment echoed by numerous individuals. Despite this, your poem triumphs, as each line delivers a clever reinterpretation of well-known expressions, revealing your remarkable aptitude for whimsical diction. Speaks Volumes February 23, 2024 at 1:39 PM Love your enthusiasm dear friend, just another N/A to add to my huge and growing collection, but I admit I am having fun writing and that's what counts. Thank you for the glowing acceptance of my effort. . Wen

Yann Rolland February 22, 2024 at 3:16 PM this create a surreal impression, atmosphere, i love free verse as others, you make a fascinating "bric à brac", do'nt know the english word, but the poem is successful, thanks poet Speaks Volumes February 22, 2024 at 3:27 PM Bric a brac works perfectly Yann, I use that phrase in conversation. Some time I feel my head is full of Bric a brac. Thanks for your lovely comment. I am trying to learn the right way to do footles, and Sweet Andrea has helped me for future attempts. I hope I am a good student. Cheers dear friend . Have a happy day. Wen

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2024 at 9:09 PM These may not be exactly footles but I can see the humor in them. That last one is really cool. Andrea Dietrich February 24, 2024 at 9:15 PM Hmm will look into that Speaks Volumes February 21, 2024 at 10:37 PM I wonder should I re-name them free verse ? I might try that. Nothing to lose ? Thanks for the idea Andrea. Nope cant do that, I just looked it already been read. :( Oh BTW Valsa just commented on my poem The reason I may not always seem normal. Why don't you use the reply section of her comment to talk to her?