A Rose and Its Thorn

Before the faint feathered light of dawn becomes airborne
and the world around me lies hushed in peaceful slumber
I often ruminate on the rose and its weaponry of a thorn
equating them to thoughts that both please and encumber
I delve deeply into my soul where passion has been worn

How resplendent the petals of a bloomed dew-kissed rose
Velvet to my finger's touch, in its long-stemmed splendor
Like tender blessings I receive as I reflect in quiet repose
the echoes pulsing within my heart, in grateful surrender
It's there I remember whispers of love and its tragic woes

Uninvited comes the sting of thorns; my cause for bleeding
Deep scratches that inflict mordant worry and sullen pains
but never have they breached my stoic faith by misleading
my heart to cast asperse shadows of scars and bloodstains
on the life of this servant who for God's mercy is pleading

I hear the love song of a wood thrush, calling to its mate
Through a window glows golden glimmers of morning sun
I'm imbued by a breath of warmth, garnered as I meditate
on the generous gift of a new day, sovereignly being spun
I humble myself through life's rivers that I must navigate

6/24/20
Reflection in Silence Poetry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/5/2020 12:03:00 PM
Very nice indeed. Love it very much Thanks for sharing
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/5/2020 6:17:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem. I am delighted.
Date: 6/29/2020 2:03:00 PM
A huge huge congratulations on your high placement. You deserve it.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/1/2020 3:13:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 6/26/2020 7:13:00 AM
BIG congrats on your win, Jenna--I feel the depth of emotions you display in this poem.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2020 7:30:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/26/2020 2:54:00 AM
Your words are full of the wonders of nature that we often forget to admire. Love the way you blend lessons of moving forward in life through gorgeous imagery Jenna. Congratulations on your win :) God bless you
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2020 7:30:00 AM
Your commented words are very kind. Thank you.
Date: 6/25/2020 8:48:00 AM
Beautiful reflections in a beautifully written poem, Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/25/2020 10:25:00 AM
James, your words are generous in describing my lines. Thank you very much for the offering.
Date: 6/25/2020 6:26:00 AM
Great take on the contest Jenna... Such lovely imagery, in silence, we hear so much more... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/25/2020 7:04:00 AM
Silent One, thank you for complimenting my poetry and allowing it a place in your contest.
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