A Rose

A rose a thing of beauty,
Soaked in sweetest perfume.
Petals as soft and smooth as freshly woven silk,
To be held with love and tender care.

To me you are a rose,
In many things you are the same.
The hidden thorns that pierce my skin,
When held wrong.

The rose’s thorn I can stand take it out and throw away,
The one from you stabs my heart,
Take your thorn and let me be;
The love from you I no longer need.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 27, 2009 at 5:27 PM
Thank you for a very enjoyable read. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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