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a rooster crows… aroma of coffee greets the sun __ morning star mirrored in the pond… dawn drips with dew ____ as the sun rises a jogger runs by my house.... I warm the doughnuts _______ I hear the shower and someone singing opera.... the dog is barking ______________ the morning paper drips with last night's disaster.... I drink a fresh start _________________ Senryu/Haiku mix

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 11/28/2011 3:36:00 PM
YOU are getting the hang of it! If you had said [dew on the grass] your last line would have been more haiku like [we know we would not be able to see this until dawn] ...Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 11/28/2011 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Short Short Haiku" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2011 12:10:00 PM
Carrie congrats on your win, loved it..David
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Date: 11/26/2011 11:28:00 AM
Hi Carrie :) Super congrats on your win :) I love the smell of coffee and this one got me inhaling for it (hmm I rarely drink coffee though) and I love that 2nd one, how you tied that dew with the pond :) love seeing your lovely pic :) and thank you again for dropping by my blog with your thoughtful words :) hugs to you!
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Date: 11/26/2011 8:19:00 AM
Excellent imagery you have captured here Carrie.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/26/2011 1:36:00 AM
Looks like it was a lovely morning round your way... Congratulations on a job well done...Margaret
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Date: 11/25/2011 11:43:00 PM
LOVE these, Carrie. They certainly get the senses going!! Congratulations and your avatar is so sweet!
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Date: 11/25/2011 4:45:00 PM
Outstanding entries Carrie. I especially adored the second one. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/15/2011 1:40:00 AM
top notch Carrie, love the rooster linking to coffee, best of luck..David
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