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A Rondelet Rhyme

Why,why so sad!
Where is that smile and ready grin
Why,why so sad! 
Rejoice,rejoice and now be glad
Let your heart take this promise in
Once for all,His death,cancelled sin!
Why,why so sad!

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Kash Poet

Date: 8/1/2011 1:38:00 PM

A great poem here Brian.Congratulations on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2011 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Brian. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/31/2011 8:55:00 PM

This is a first rate poem. Congratulations Brian. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 7/31/2011 8:29:00 PM

Brian, great to see your poem honored in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/31/2011 6:34:00 PM

SWEET CONGRATULATIONS~~~~smile for the placement~~~~*-*junjun

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/31/2011 5:15:00 PM

Excellent, Brian. Especially liked the sixth line. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2011 5:14:00 PM

Congrats Brian on your wonderful winning poem in the contest.. brilliant words as always luv.. still having issues with your contest viewing? I cannot access my member page since last night.. .. missing the fun of your fast paced contests luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2011 3:56:00 PM

VERY nice, Brian. Congrats on your win with this spiritual rondelet. ( I didn't have time for the blogs but I noticed you might be having a contest?) I didn't see one posted so maybe you are having problems still. I hope they solve it for you. I can't even see my member area right now!

Tim B

Date: 7/31/2011 3:07:00 PM

Indeed!! Rejoice for his love has saved us all, an excellent honoring of the savior and a beautiful poem, congrats on your win.

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 7/31/2011 2:31:00 PM

A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! I like this one very much. Have a peaceful day filled with blessings! Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/31/2011 2:12:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in my contest, Brian

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/20/2011 11:49:00 AM

Soup Mail!!!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/20/2011 11:49:00 AM

Thanks for your entry to my contest. But I would request you to correct and rewrite your poem as I committed some mistakes in laying down the rules. please visit the Contest Page and do the needful. Don't worry if you can't. I shall allow the entry as followed by the rules you read. But good if you can correct it.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/20/2011 6:45:00 AM

I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and amazing piece Brian. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol

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