A Romantic Evening

Stew in the pot

Potatoes in the oven

It’s nearly six o’clock

The apartment looks like heaven


Flowers in place

Candle lights for two

Soft music on the radio

Of love we’ll sip its brew


The buzzer sounds inside of me

My heart beats to the door

There stands a beautiful woman

With a smile that I adore


Like a magnate pulls the clip

Our eyes locked in a stare

We kissed the kiss of Angels

And Deviled in the bed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/5/2019 3:38:00 AM
heart beats to the door...lovely words. anticipation..sweet. Wonderful write. Ann
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Arturo Michael
Date: 9/5/2019 5:29:00 AM
Thank you Ann
Date: 6/22/2019 7:55:00 PM
Passionate poetry, Arturo. So very romantic and I just adore the last two lines for a brilliant and hot finale! Warmest wishes always, mon ami.. ~Susan
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/24/2019 5:32:00 AM
Thank you Susan...A little love thing...All the best my friend
Date: 6/20/2019 12:07:00 PM
WOW Arturo - Loved this poem - erotic, romantic, sweet, cute and clever. Well penned my friend. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/24/2019 5:32:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer...
Date: 6/16/2019 11:24:00 AM
GREAT last lines here. A sizzler!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/24/2019 5:33:00 AM
And some good food too
Date: 6/16/2019 9:53:00 AM
I like the way that you took such prosaic stuff--stew and potatoes--and turned it into a hot date...And those last two lines are just perfect, Arturo. Nicely done! :) gw
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/16/2019 10:22:00 AM
Food... can do so much to stimulate the vibe...
Date: 6/15/2019 5:11:00 PM
It made me wish it had been written for me and I was the woman at the door. Well done, Arturo.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/15/2019 5:16:00 PM
May your wish come true...Thank you Jeanne
Date: 6/13/2019 7:00:00 PM
A Romantic Evening indeed. You set the mood perfectly here, within your words. A kiss holds many emotions of the heart. This is beautiful in every way, Arturo. :) Brandy
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/14/2019 5:56:00 AM
Thank you Brandy...Very sweet of you...All the best
Date: 6/13/2019 3:59:00 PM
ohh, what a tender rush of heated affection, arturo... got more?... much enjoyed, you sweet devil!...huggs
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/13/2019 5:38:00 PM
Thanks nette...Sprucing up the Thursday evening poetry...
Date: 6/13/2019 3:30:00 PM
you penned a beautifully romantic poem, love the last two lines, " kissed the kiss of angels, deviled in bed" it paints the perfect ending to your romantic evening, and poem alike
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/13/2019 3:38:00 PM
You can't beat a romantic evening with the one you love...Just NICE...Thanks for passing by Sandra...All the best
Date: 6/13/2019 2:08:00 PM
phwoooarh you are on fire with your passionate pen Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/13/2019 3:36:00 PM
A little give and take here...Thank you Jan
Date: 6/13/2019 1:26:00 PM
Oh, how wonderfully you express yourself Felt I was there! Awesome Panagiota
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/13/2019 3:34:00 PM
Thanks PR...I think I'm unstuck...the block was heavy to push aside...
Date: 6/13/2019 1:22:00 PM
- A heavenly angel kiss, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/13/2019 3:32:00 PM
I'm coming out...Thank you Anne-lise...
Date: 6/13/2019 11:19:00 AM
Delightfully sublime! :))) xomo
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/13/2019 3:30:00 PM
It could be a lot of things...Thanks for passing...love to see you...
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