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A Romantic Evening

Stew in the pot Potatoes in the oven It’s nearly six o’clock The apartment looks like heaven Flowers in place Candle lights for two Soft music on the radio Of love we’ll sip its brew The buzzer sounds inside of me My heart beats to the door There stands a beautiful woman With a smile that I adore Like a magnate pulls the clip Our eyes locked in a stare We kissed the kiss of Angels And Deviled in the bed

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Ann Foster

Date: 9/5/2019 3:38:00 AM

heart beats to the door...lovely words. anticipation..sweet. Wonderful write. Ann

Arturo Michael
Date: 9/5/2019 5:29:00 AM

Thank you Ann

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/22/2019 7:55:00 PM

Passionate poetry, Arturo. So very romantic and I just adore the last two lines for a brilliant and hot finale! Warmest wishes always, mon ami.. ~Susan

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/24/2019 5:32:00 AM

Thank you Susan...A little love thing...All the best my friend

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/20/2019 12:07:00 PM

WOW Arturo - Loved this poem - erotic, romantic, sweet, cute and clever. Well penned my friend. Hugs, Jennifer.

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/24/2019 5:32:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2019 11:24:00 AM

GREAT last lines here. A sizzler!

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/24/2019 5:33:00 AM

And some good food too

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/16/2019 9:53:00 AM

I like the way that you took such prosaic stuff--stew and potatoes--and turned it into a hot date...And those last two lines are just perfect, Arturo. Nicely done! :) gw

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/16/2019 10:22:00 AM

Food... can do so much to stimulate the vibe...

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/15/2019 5:11:00 PM

It made me wish it had been written for me and I was the woman at the door. Well done, Arturo.

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/15/2019 5:16:00 PM

May your wish come true...Thank you Jeanne

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/13/2019 7:00:00 PM

A Romantic Evening indeed. You set the mood perfectly here, within your words. A kiss holds many emotions of the heart. This is beautiful in every way, Arturo. :) Brandy

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/14/2019 5:56:00 AM

Thank you Brandy...Very sweet of you...All the best

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/13/2019 3:59:00 PM

ohh, what a tender rush of heated affection, arturo... got more?... much enjoyed, you sweet devil!...huggs

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/13/2019 5:38:00 PM

Thanks nette...Sprucing up the Thursday evening poetry...

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/13/2019 3:30:00 PM

you penned a beautifully romantic poem, love the last two lines, " kissed the kiss of angels, deviled in bed" it paints the perfect ending to your romantic evening, and poem alike

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/13/2019 3:38:00 PM

You can't beat a romantic evening with the one you love...Just NICE...Thanks for passing by Sandra...All the best