Pat Adams Poet Limerick

A Romantic Endeavor

His alarm failed, so no time to be pedantic 
He still tried in his haste to be romantic
He had to hurry he was late
And in such an absent state
He slammed his wife and kissed the door, when frantic!

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Dale Gregory Cozart November 26, 2017 at 8:12 AM Lol! I can actually picture it even without the photo!! Pat Adams November 26, 2017 at 11:31 AM Glad you liked it Dale!...Thanks for commenting......Patrick

Akkina Downing November 25, 2017 at 11:37 PM Lol! Very good pat, I enjoyed this :) Pat Adams November 25, 2017 at 11:58 PM Thank you for commenting and I'm really glad you liked it!..........Have a good one..........pat

Line Gauthier November 25, 2017 at 8:25 PM Hi Pat, that was funny. To tell you the truth you started me laughing at the romantic pedantic... somehow that image was a huge leap of imagination for me. Well done, Pat. Pat Adams November 25, 2017 at 11:56 PM I love that. It makes me feel so good to know it brought a smile. I hope you smile a lot every day!!! Have a nice night Line..............xx............Pat

Jan Allison November 25, 2017 at 7:38 PM OUCH in more ways than one Pat!:-) hugs Jan xx Pat Adams November 25, 2017 at 11:55 PM Ahh....what ya gonna do???........thanks for commenting....x..pat