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A Romantic Day

Bought her a bunch of roses on his way, he carefully rehearsed what he would say, She answered door in bikini, In sheer awe he dropped to his knee, What a lovely start to their romantic day!

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Date: 6/7/2020 12:31:00 PM
Forget the flowers, eh? lol. Great one, Krish. Enjoyed! :) gw
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/7/2020 12:59:00 PM
Thanks Gershon! Yes, why the flower? Ha, ha!
Date: 6/6/2020 6:19:00 PM
Delightful, Krish! Your write conveys all the emotional angst of a proposal in a great witty way!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/7/2020 12:27:00 AM
Thanks Sam! Men often more nervous!
Date: 6/6/2020 6:01:00 PM
Hello Kirish, he got a shock when the door was opened by her. Enjoy your evening my firend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/7/2020 6:19:00 PM
Hello Krish Radhakrishna,oh--he did! Enjoy yor evening my friend.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/7/2020 12:28:00 AM
Thanks Darlene.he did! A pleasant shock!

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