A Romantic Day

Bought her a bunch of roses on his way,
he carefully rehearsed what he would say,
She answered door in bikini,
In sheer awe he dropped to his knee,
What a lovely start to their romantic day!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 12:31 PM
Forget the flowers, eh? lol. Great one, Krish. Enjoyed! :) gw
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 12:59 PM
Thanks Gershon! Yes, why the flower? Ha, ha!
Kauffman Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 6:19 PM
Delightful, Krish! Your write conveys all the emotional angst of a proposal in a great witty way!
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 12:27 AM
Thanks Sam! Men often more nervous!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 6:01 PM
Hello Kirish, he got a shock when the door was opened by her. Enjoy your evening my firend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 6:19 PM
Hello Krish Radhakrishna,oh--he did! Enjoy yor evening my friend.
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 12:28 AM
Thanks Darlene.he did! A pleasant shock!
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