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A Romantic Day-Nk

a sunny day you gave me in wet May clouds flew free held my hand took me to sea shore sand churned by waves blue from thicket cool southern wind blew buoyant joy in me grew draped me with yearning hue I found fresh fervor new through the flair of dawn sky soared in air far away love growing wings to fly with you on this romantic day ______________ August 28, 2022 Syllable count checked with HMS Rhyme checked with RhymeZone.com Contest : Charlie New-Ku Sponsored by : Charles Messina

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Date: 10/21/2022 4:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go with this romantic write. Sara
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/21/2022 11:19:00 PM
Thank you, Sara for your visit and encouragement.
Date: 10/18/2022 4:13:00 PM
SO romantic, Subimal. You did a great job on this form, and you added your magic pen to boot! Congratulations on your win in my contest! Charlie
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/21/2022 11:18:00 PM
Thank you, Charles, for the placement and for your encouraging comment.
Date: 8/28/2022 8:10:00 AM
Wonderful!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/28/2022 11:52:00 PM
Thank you, Terry for your visit and for your encouraging comment.

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