A Roller-Coaster Ride

Life is like a roller-coaster ride,
with it's ups and down's.
From the time you are born,
until you die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Roper Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 2:35 PM
So very true, Paula.. Blessing my friend
Goldsmith Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. Enjoy your day writing away.............
Deschler Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 9:53 AM
So true... and after those ups and downs, we find ourselves laughing at the end of the ride :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this life Roller-Coaster Ride write. Going up/down and back around. Sometimes laughing and sometimes crying. Enjoy your day writing away.............
Kiser Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 12:55 PM
That's hitting that proverbial "nail-on-the-head". Well done.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 10:27 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Roller-Coaster Ride write. I enjoyed writing it. Enjoy your day writing away............
Slaughter Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 9:46 AM
Amen to that, Paula! Fortunately, mine is slowing down...a bit...now.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:33 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my  Roller-Coaster Ride write. What goes down will come back up. Good days are on the way up for you. Watch for the high ones. Enjoy your day writing away............
George Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 9:38 PM
Perfectly agree ! Life is a roller coaster ride. We have to take up the challenge. So well expressed dear Paula !
Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:31 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun Roller-Coaster Ride write. Yes, we need to take up the many challenges in our lives. Enjoy your day writing away............
Meadows Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 8:47 AM
Yes it is. A good poem. Well done.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun write. Enjoy your day writing away............
Buehler Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 3:53 PM
The lows make the highs so much sweeter. A great poem, Paula. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. So very true, the lows do make the highs so much better/sweeter. I love the high ones the best but guess we all do. Enjoy your day writing away............
Kaufman Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 1:34 PM
Absolutely true Paula. We should all feel grateful for its challenges; without some struggles, bliss would probably get boring. Enjoyed
Goldsmith Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 11:52 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my write. Life here has never been boring. Boring sounds nice. Enjoy your day writing away............
Goldsmith Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 9:47 AM
A Roller-Coaster Ride Date Written 6/22/2023
Koplin Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 1:33 PM
Yes it is, Paula.
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