A Robin's Nest

Close to the woody glade
Hidden in the leafy shade
A smart robin built a nest
Like a cozy little chest

With twigs and leaves, it was made
Within it, four eggs she laid
She sat long brooding in her nest
Indeed it was a tedious test
      
One by one, the eggs were hatched
And four tiny birds that closely matched
Came out breaking the freckled shell
Making the Mother bird’s happiness swell

The mama enjoyed their sweet company
To her, boredom no more came to annoy
The nest rang with a chorus of song
 It was made vibrant with a happy throng

 The parent birds fed them taking turns
As they grew, for the sky they began to yearn
At times the fledglings stuck out their heads
Longing to leave their craggy beds

They found the sky blue and clear
Still they were under the clutches of fear
But they knew, outside lay true liberty
Before them stretched infinity

No more did they hesitate
Their mama’s movements they did imitate
They splayed and spread their wings
And into the sky, took off with steady beatings!
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McBride  Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 6:53 PM
Love it,there is so much to learn from animals, this is a great joyful, uplifting poem
Brul Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 9:24 AM
What a vivid description of a moving story encapsulated in a brilliant poem. I have no words. Excellent!
Meadows Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 11:42 PM
A lovely poem
Rone Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 8:43 AM
I hope your timing was right to see that first flight. What a sight! Best - Ken
George Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 12:08 AM
Thanks a lot Ken.... Glad for your stopping by and your lovely comment !
Buhagiar Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 3:56 AM
Delightful and cute poem, Valsa. Love robins. They visit often in Malta. ~~
George Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 12:07 AM
Yes, the are such cute birds ! Thanks a lot Victor !
Riabi Dziri Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 2:11 PM
You rhyme beautifully into your reader's soul! What a stunning poetry, Valsa! A treat to read your work of beauty! My deepest regards and blessings.
George Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 8:22 PM
No words to thank you . My gratitude can't be expressed in words. Never expected that my simple poem would be so warmly received by poets like you. Stay blessed, Besma !
Wolf Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 1:15 PM
How enjoyably you've captured the unfolding 'drama' of the robin's nest, from its building to the bursting of the shells, to the flight to freedom. Lovely penned, Valsa. And welcome to Poetry Soup! Write on, please! :) Gershon
George Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 8:31 PM
It is a blessing to have such encouraging friends. Actually I watched from close quarters the bird family building a nest and nurturing the young ones. The care the parent birds took and the empty nest they left behind once the little birdies took off on wings to a larger world....all these amazed me. Greshon, so happy that you enjoyed my poem and thanks a lot for the very lovely words....
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