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A Robin's Nest

Close to the woody glade Hidden in the leafy shade A smart robin built a nest Like a cozy little chest With twigs and leaves, it was made Within it, four eggs she laid She sat long brooding in her nest Indeed it was a tedious test One by one, the eggs were hatched And four tiny birds that closely matched Came out breaking the freckled shell Making the Mother bird’s happiness swell The mama enjoyed their sweet company To her, boredom no more came to annoy The nest rang with a chorus of song It was made vibrant with a happy throng The parent birds fed them taking turns As they grew, for the sky they began to yearn At times the fledglings stuck out their heads Longing to leave their craggy beds They found the sky blue and clear Still they were under the clutches of fear But they knew, outside lay true liberty Before them stretched infinity No more did they hesitate Their mama’s movements they did imitate They splayed and spread their wings And into the sky, took off with steady beatings!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/28/2023 6:53:00 PM
Love it,there is so much to learn from animals, this is a great joyful, uplifting poem
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Date: 2/24/2022 9:24:00 AM
What a vivid description of a moving story encapsulated in a brilliant poem. I have no words. Excellent!
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Date: 2/9/2022 11:42:00 PM
A lovely poem
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Date: 2/7/2022 8:43:00 AM
I hope your timing was right to see that first flight. What a sight! Best - Ken
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Valsa George
Date: 2/8/2022 12:08:00 AM
Thanks a lot Ken.... Glad for your stopping by and your lovely comment !
Date: 12/10/2021 3:56:00 AM
Delightful and cute poem, Valsa. Love robins. They visit often in Malta. ~~
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Valsa George
Date: 2/8/2022 12:07:00 AM
Yes, the are such cute birds ! Thanks a lot Victor !
Date: 11/9/2021 2:11:00 PM
You rhyme beautifully into your reader's soul! What a stunning poetry, Valsa! A treat to read your work of beauty! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/9/2021 8:22:00 PM
No words to thank you . My gratitude can't be expressed in words. Never expected that my simple poem would be so warmly received by poets like you. Stay blessed, Besma !
Date: 11/9/2021 1:15:00 PM
How enjoyably you've captured the unfolding 'drama' of the robin's nest, from its building to the bursting of the shells, to the flight to freedom. Lovely penned, Valsa. And welcome to Poetry Soup! Write on, please! :) Gershon
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Date: 11/9/2021 8:31:00 PM
It is a blessing to have such encouraging friends. Actually I watched from close quarters the bird family building a nest and nurturing the young ones. The care the parent birds took and the empty nest they left behind once the little birdies took off on wings to a larger world....all these amazed me. Greshon, so happy that you enjoyed my poem and thanks a lot for the very lovely words....

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