A Road Trip

a fall road trip see four smoke stacks in distance.. paper mill scent

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Robert Nehls

Date: 7/14/2014 7:36:00 AM

There was a paper mill in Flagstaff, Arizona, where I lived for time. My recollection of the paper mill smell was not to pleasant. I don't know if they all smell like that but this one was quite bad. The smoke stacks were very impressive, Sara. Enjoyed this one, my friend..... Robert.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2012 10:37:00 PM

RECALLS TO MIND MY TRAVELS YEARS AGO THRU THE SOUTH OF GREAT BEAUTY AND RUSTIC SIGHTS AND SOUNDS SARA .. U CAPTURED MUCH IN 3 LINES LUVV..

Jack Horne

Date: 11/12/2012 2:47:00 PM

I often forget the sense of smell - love the way you've used it in these recently posted haiku, my friend (so much better than sunshine on the washing up, lol)

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/11/2012 11:18:00 AM

Wow, you have delighted me with this awesome write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly wonderful and fabulous poem this afternoon! What a powerful little piece, you have captured a special feel that one would feel while going on a trip, very enlightening and illustrious, perfect! Great Work!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/11/2012 9:49:00 AM

another wonder from you....

Kash Poet

Date: 11/11/2012 7:10:00 AM

Very nice haiku!Enjoyed the read Sara.