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A River Flows

A river in an African deep jungle, They saw you and me as foreigners when we decided to throw our selves beneath the waters with our clothes on. We let our waves of thoughts get us wet, and spoke the truth to each other without words. We smiled and shed some tears, we held each other, and never touched the ground. We dived into the warmth, and touched transparency…. They always lived here and never noticed that dreams are found within their reach. The rives runs, Its warmth is infinite, and yet for them its cold and still. We had a dream, and they had none. Our dream is true and who should know if they would see, our dream as theirs, or just one day create their own, and see the way their river flows…

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Date: 1/16/2016 1:59:00 PM
Awesome piece, love the vivid image in it. I want read more from you lovely lady. Good day JF
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Date: 9/18/2013 9:48:00 AM
Hi Omneya, just re-reading some of your poems - yep, they are still as awesome as before.
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Date: 11/21/2012 6:37:00 AM
Hmmm, lovely write!
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Date: 11/11/2012 6:15:00 PM
Omneya, Congratulations with your awesome poem on the featured spots of the week.. Take care.. ~xox~pd
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 11/17/2012 2:56:00 PM
HEy Pd, Thanks alot for stopping by and sinding your congratulations! Have a great week, Love, Omneya
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Date: 11/17/2012 2:56:00 PM
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Date: 11/6/2012 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful poetry being featured this week Omneya. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2012 2:50:00 PM
Ohhh Thanks alot Carrol :))
Date: 11/4/2012 7:23:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 11/17/2012 2:49:00 PM
Thanks a lot Leo! :))
Date: 11/1/2012 7:56:00 AM
Goddamn it !!! this is much more than a poem !!! first part : 'LOVE' 'warmth','water','transparency' , 'getting into one: nothing separating but transparency' We smiled and shed some tears: I love this one! We let our waves of thoughts get us wet, this one too ! then, river = life !! we carry our dreams through the current , life never stand still so carry you dream with the current and create yourself ! don't stand still, don't die in cold !! that's your poem as I see , thank you !!
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 11/4/2012 4:09:00 AM
Mouwahed, thanks lot for your inspirational comment! so glad you got a feeling of what they poem wants to say! have a great week dear poet friend, Omneya
Date: 10/30/2012 7:02:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poe.
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 11/4/2012 4:02:00 AM
hey thaanks for popping in Vensa :) Glad u like my poem!
Date: 10/27/2012 2:24:00 PM
You are welcome to the Poetrysoup. Nice poem enjoyed about the picture of flowing rivers. Thanks for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl
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Date: 11/4/2012 4:01:00 AM
Thankss Bl, so glad you like my poem! Have a great week, Love, Omneya
Date: 10/23/2012 9:25:00 PM
a dreamy view in your piece lovely poetess. just as pretty as you regards, jett
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/26/2012 6:08:00 PM
Thanks Jett!! so glad you liked the poem, Thanks for reading and commenting! have a good week end :)
Date: 10/14/2012 11:54:00 AM
Art in words flows through your poetic scene. Love it. Hugs Michael
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Date: 10/14/2012 2:26:00 PM
Hey Micheal, thanks for reading and commenting on my poem so glad you like it! have a great day :) Omneya
Date: 10/14/2012 10:30:00 AM
Just lovely Omneya! This scene is typical of human beings, be it a location, an institution or a new thought - change is not a welcome thing and those who bring it especially when they are 'outsiders' are viewed as enemies. Nice!
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/14/2012 2:24:00 PM
:D wow Vicky you explained what I wanted to communicate through that poem directly with your own words! Thanks for reading and commenting on my work :) have a great day! Omneya
Date: 10/13/2012 2:56:00 PM
Nice parallels here. I think you need to spell "their" in the last line
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/14/2012 5:15:00 AM
heyy glad you liked the poem, Thanks for the spelling correction! Done.
Date: 10/12/2012 10:42:00 PM
well done. D
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/13/2012 6:25:00 AM
Thanksss Dominix! glad you liked it! have a good time :) Omneya
Date: 10/12/2012 8:08:00 PM
nicely written Omneya...
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/13/2012 6:26:00 AM
Thanksss Joseph! :) very glad you liked it! have a good day!! Omneya
Date: 10/12/2012 10:56:00 AM
Omneya, Your words carried me to that river in Africa. The unspoken communication was powerful and full of passion. Excellent... I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you. Harold
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/12/2012 1:11:00 PM
Hey Harold, Thanks for reading and commenting. So glad you liked the Poem and would be happy to find you reading my future work! looking forward to read more work for you also. Thanks. Omneya
Date: 10/12/2012 6:25:00 AM
Omneya, I would also welcome you to the P-Soup. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Like your poem, you write very well. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/12/2012 6:43:00 AM
Hello Anne, Thanks for welcoming me in P-Soup seems to me that many people here are warm and welcoming , so I am so glad I became part of the community! So glad you like my poem and your encouragement is something I really value! :)
Date: 10/11/2012 1:05:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Omneya. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/12/2012 5:39:00 AM
Hey Carol Thanks for your great warm welcoming words :) they inspired me and made me feel like writing more and reading more poems. This The Poetry soup I believe is going to get me back to poetry writing after nearly a year of writer's block!wish you all the best too! Love, Omneya
Date: 10/11/2012 10:27:00 AM
Beautifully written!
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/11/2012 10:34:00 AM
Thanks :) glad you like it!

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