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A Ripple In Time

A new borns cry Tearful last good bye Swaying waves of golden prairie grass Shifting desert dunes - an hour glass An acorn dropping among forest leaves To mighty oak - a lifetime of dreams The changing moon - to full again Each morn' the sun - new skies begin Eagles soar high - our hearts go there These ripples in time - we all share ©Donna Jones

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Date: 2/24/2019 5:13:00 PM
Hello Donna Jones, I like the way you described the ripple in time. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 12/22/2018 8:25:00 PM
i love the flow of your poems the tempo of it was really good. congratulations on being featured this week. Have a great hoilday and happy new year. _Jesse McDonald
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Date: 12/16/2018 9:12:00 AM
Donna, congratulations on having your wonderful poem selected as a Feature Poem this week, enjoy the honor ~
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Date: 11/26/2017 5:59:00 PM
Great representation and imagery, put together in a couples' form with timeless meaning.
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Date: 12/1/2015 1:37:00 PM
Awesome poem! I'm using it for a project in school and my teachers love it!! Great job!
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Date: 12/1/2015 9:59:00 PM
Aaah. Thank you so much.....it would be cool to know what you are doing...just wondering...where are you from
Date: 11/22/2015 5:16:00 AM
That's amazing! I just don't get 'an hour glass' very well cuz I english is not my first language, can u explain it for me?
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Date: 5/26/2015 6:10:00 PM
Donna, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/20/2014 2:10:00 PM
A very charming and poignant poem. I really do think it is quite lovely.
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Date: 9/21/2014 4:37:00 PM
I love this poem Donna, thanks for sharing....
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Date: 8/28/2014 8:12:00 PM
Hey there Donna. Love your comment about my poem "Waiting"....good point. Really love "A Ripple in Time." Eagles soaring high-our hearts go there...very powerful! Love reading your poetry! Keep up the good work.
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Date: 4/28/2014 9:57:00 AM
Donna, I am impressed with this great work..I am glad that I chose it to read today. My heart soars after reading..Sara
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Date: 3/13/2014 7:43:00 PM
Donna, Donna, what a lovely write! I read this poem, four times. I could feel your soul in this beautiful poem. Thank you for sharring, Donna Jones
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Date: 3/13/2014 10:03:00 PM
Thank you very much Larry...glad you enjoyed..made my day..:-)
Date: 2/5/2014 8:32:00 AM
just love this poem. It's perfect. Adding you to my favorites.
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Date: 2/5/2014 10:01:00 PM
A wonderful compliment Randy...thank you.
Date: 12/24/2013 12:44:00 PM
You know I always love your writing.... This one take its place on a list of well deserved winners.... I've got a lot of catching up to do. I just came home today from rehab on a hip replacement. I was in since 11/12/13 and didn't have a lot of access to the site..... Love ya and Merry Christmas to you and yours..... Jake
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Date: 2/5/2014 10:02:00 PM
Thanks much Jake...how's the rehab going? Should be well on the way to good by now.I hope so..:-)
Date: 12/21/2013 9:29:00 PM
Very touching poem worded with nice poetic rhythm. Enjoyed very lately. Loved always,my friend, bl
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Date: 12/21/2013 8:22:00 AM
I like this as it makes me remember
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Date: 2/5/2014 10:03:00 PM
Hello....thanks so much....very kind....
Date: 12/21/2013 12:11:00 AM
GREAT POEM BY ALL STANDARDS. JM
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Date: 2/5/2014 10:04:00 PM
Thanks soooo much...
Date: 12/20/2013 8:04:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this poem and others you've written. Very, very nice work.
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Date: 2/5/2014 9:59:00 PM
Thanks so much John....a lot!
Date: 12/20/2013 7:15:00 PM
A beautiful poetic compendium of nature,day,night and the eagle all sharing a ripple of time. Great Write, Donna!
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Date: 2/5/2014 10:07:00 PM
Thanks so much Ralph
Date: 12/20/2013 6:58:00 PM
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Date: 2/5/2014 10:07:00 PM
:-) :-) :-)
Date: 12/20/2013 3:39:00 PM
A very good poem Donna, I enjoyed reading it...Hugs....Roger
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Date: 2/5/2014 10:06:00 PM
Hi Roger....better late than never huh? Sorry....I'm behind....thanks so much for stopping...
Date: 12/20/2013 3:31:00 PM
Well Donna, You have certainly come a long way since your first poems. This one is very, very good as well as the others on your "best" list. I like the title. It reminds me of a book I read. Cheers, Roy
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Date: 12/21/2013 10:23:00 PM
Thanks Roy...need to come check out your latest also..what do you mean my best list? I'm clueless here..anyway glad you liked it..thanks...
Date: 8/27/2013 8:19:00 PM
'Ripples in time'...sounds almost existential. That line was so good. May I borrow it? Allan
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Date: 12/21/2013 10:20:00 PM
Glad you like...its a contest line..you must ask whoever promoted the contest..-..thanks for stopping by
Date: 8/1/2013 1:25:00 PM
This was really lovely to read Donna.I love the contrasting mix of imagery that adds beauty to this piece.Well done!
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Date: 12/21/2013 10:17:00 PM
Thank. So much.:-) nice to see you
Date: 5/27/2013 9:56:00 PM
a pretty poem. Donna, what a lovely ending....... SKAT
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Date: 5/28/2013 6:24:00 PM
Thanks skat!!!!! You're sweet..
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