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A Right Time To Die

A Right Time To Die No time to hide. No time to think. The life inside me, was no longer pink. I saw it coming, and tried to run. Oh that feeling.. is not much fun. My mind at first, was filled with fear, realizing IT was near. I knew my lifetime, was somehow up. Inside my feelings said ‘this just sucks’. I didn’t really want to go, so I clung on, with all I know. Death cannot take you, unless you give up the fight, and so I battled, throughout the night. He tried to trick me, with warmth and light. Recognizing his tactics, I said ‘tonight’s not the night!’ He tried to seize upon my soul resisting the pull I tried to stay whole. I saw the doctors as I looked down. All their faces grimaced that hope was out. They called my name, to snatch me back, as all my functions, had begun to slack. I heard their chants as I floated out the room. Quickly coming back today was not my doom. A single memory did the trick, saving me right on the brink. People needed me to stay, today was not mine to slip away. Copyright Elle Smith 2017

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Date: 12/28/2017 2:40:00 PM
It sounds like you are better for having experienced this epiphany. Well done Elle...
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Elle Smith
Date: 12/28/2017 5:43:00 PM
Definitely as I gives you a better outlook of life, especially to properly evaluate what is truly important! :)
Date: 12/28/2017 1:09:00 PM
As a cancer survivor and someone who dies three times at birth I can relate to this... very deep.
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Elle Smith
Date: 12/28/2017 5:42:00 PM
I am pleased it resonates as it means my recollection was clearly spot on :) Thanks, Silent One!
Date: 12/28/2017 7:25:00 AM
If it wasn't a real experience...You certainly described it well...All the best Elle
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Date: 12/28/2017 7:31:00 AM
Michael, you are quite correct as this was a real experience, which has given me some measure on life and especially time. Many thanks for commenting :)

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