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A Rhyme Within a Dream

Today while walking together with reverent hands
There are so many unheld books within my unkempt dreams
to the wonderful man that bestows my passions has worn
as we walk together holding hands, in the dove-gray sands

Within our heartfelt love we will never feel so, so forlorn
Years to come, we'll be filled with the heated fires of time
till then we'll never be able to be within a numberless dream
I will always bring you my passionate verses in poetic rhyme.

03/22/2017
Erin A.Charles

Copyright © Erin A. Charles | Year Posted 2017

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Anil Deo Date: 3/26/2017 12:44:00 PM Thanks for sharing, Erin. I think I get it ... elegant rhyme and diction, make this a poem to come back to. Shalom, AD. Login to Reply Erin A. Charles Date: 3/28/2017 1:02:00 PM Thank you so very much Anil for your beauty of a comment.

Constance La France Date: 3/25/2017 12:02:00 PM Erin, you penned a lovely first poem for soup, well done, keep writing and you will get better and better ~ Login to Reply Erin A. Charles Date: 3/28/2017 1:01:00 PM Thank you so very much Broken Wings for your beauty of a comment.

Chris Green Date: 3/23/2017 3:44:00 PM Another beautiful poem. I saw this title when I went in to read your latest and had to come back and check this out. I am glad I did. Love and romance seems to flow nicely from your pen. I really liked the second line of this, wish I had written it. Login to Reply Erin A. Charles Date: 3/23/2017 4:14:00 PM Thank you so very much Chris for your beautiful statement. I greatly appreciate your poetic words on this here poem of mine. Erin

Paul Callus Date: 3/22/2017 6:34:00 PM I'm impressed by your first contribution at Soup, Erin. May you bring more passionate verses to this poetry site. Welcome aboard! Regards // paul Login to Reply Erin A. Charles Date: 3/23/2017 12:19:00 AM Thank you so very much Paul for your warm reception and comment on my poem. // Erin