A Rhyme Less Reason

Without reason rhyme would not be sublime.
Un-metered runs of tale-tossed words, un-timed
would reasonably scatter like broken chimes,
petering-out upon the parchment page of springtime.

Without season time could not unwind
in measured meter with unearthly reason kind,
scattering broken bits like brittle finds
across the fragrant fields of summer time.

Without lessons man would not advance lifetimes,
measuring his earthly mettle in the after time
treasuring the gifts of life with autumn’s wine,
His reason is not ours to know, though it seems kind.

Without rhyme or reason, we search for the Prime,
the holy gift of love and peace exsisting before time.
Now, as we enjoy the gifts of winter most pristine,
we praise all that’s holy for the gift of life's time.

Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Contest: Put Your Best Rhyme Forward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Anglesey Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 12:34 PM
Congrats on the win. Love the poem :)
Fisher Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 4:52 PM
Way to go on the contest. I love a good monorhyme.
Gildersleeve Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 4:21 PM
A wonderful read. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warm hugs and smiles, Connie
Watkins Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 10:01 PM
Wonderful verse, Deb. I especially like the way you entwined the passage of seasons within the greater metaphor. Gary
Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 9:16 PM
Congrats on the win, Deb
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December 10, 2013 at 8:30 PM
love the win....pd
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 3:22 PM
NICELY done, and nicely won, Debs. I enjoyed its message.
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 11:39 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "Put Your Best Rhyme Forward" contest: Sponsored by: Just That Archaic Poet - Nice to take part - a pleasure to read yours Debbie - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Richards Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 9:51 AM
You have definitely put your best _foot-poem-rhyme............wayyyy forward !!! Well done, Deb!!
Dua Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 7:46 AM
Congrats on your win , Debbie
Lefanue Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 1:22 PM
Beautiful poem, Debbie. I really enjoyed my read! Happy New Year blessings! Maureen :)
Maverick Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 12:09 PM
Yes thats it..!
Maverick Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 12:18 PM
Hello Debbie, a well presented write here.. i wonder "however about a certain point :) i will not mention it publicly in your comments box..! however contact me if you wish to discuss..!
Lane Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 5:56 AM
What a great write. Beautiful and profound.
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 10:20 PM
gosh, Debs. you went all out for this contest. Makes me ashamed I didn't try one myself. This is GREAT!! Unique thoughts and imagery.
Yamin Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 5:59 PM
Dear Debbie, This is a well crafted poem - a reflection of your poetic talent. A sure Winner. Also I am deeply touched by your kind words on my poem The Autumn. I don't wish any one else (even my enemy) to be hurt like me. I extend my hands with a bouquet of love wherever there is anguish and pain. This is my way of taking vengeance . Thanks also for the impressive quote and wise words of the poet. Best wishes. -Mohammad
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November 28, 2011 at 5:40 PM
Flowed with rhythm and blossomed with rhyme. I found this most delightful, good luck Debbie...cheers Margaret
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November 28, 2011 at 5:03 PM
* "Tis Sooo Beautiful * Dear Gifted, Beautiful & Precious Debbie * Rarely Is There Found Such Poem In Rhyme * Able To Penetrate Ones Heart Amid Words Which Matter Upon Many Fronts * A Masterpiece of Beauty. * I Love Your Voice Here * Double Diamonds In Faves * Mesmerizing * My Luv, Forever & Always * Sarah." *
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