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A Return Journey By An Auto Rickshaw

An auto rickshaw, a carriage Like a tortoise Returns Along my obsolete graveled Road. The auto rickshaw rolls on: My bucolic Rocks Mirth of a birth, Rapturously. The auto rickshaw passes by a Nuptial hall :a Bride Stands in the splendor Borrowed. The auto rickshaw pauses before a Rural maze : My Career knocks get Mocked. The auto rickshaw, the three Wheeled, creeps through the Nostalgia Scenting textbooks New. The auto rickshaw halts now On a lap, For The road is lost in Fog.

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Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/21/2012 11:12:00 PM

Fabiyas, wonderful poem. Congrats on making Debbie's winners' list.................S.Ronthorpe

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/21/2012 8:53:00 PM

congrats Fabiyas on a top ten victory for this amazing poetry luv for transformation theme .. so outstanding a write luv.. hope u are doing well..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2012 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Transformation" contest Fab. Love, Carol

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 2/21/2012 7:19:00 AM

wow . very intresting depiction. congrats~and well crafte..... sashi

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2011 5:19:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/21/2011 6:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "any old butterfly poem" contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/20/2011 9:28:00 PM

fabiyas this is wonderful. Many congrats.

Bob Quigley

Date: 10/16/2011 12:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Fabiyas. Well written

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/15/2011 8:10:00 PM

FAB, CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for the support in my contest,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/15/2011 7:46:00 PM

Congrats Fabiyas on a great third place win with this lovely visual butterfly write my friend..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2011 12:15:00 PM

THANKS! FABIYAS... Yes, i'm finding time to read this poem and others... i'm excited with the note you left us poets here on the bottom of your poem... enjoyed the image you display here,,, you visioned it well,,, have yourself a great one,..p.d.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/20/2011 4:08:00 PM

splendid sybolisms creating a mood that truly amazes, fabi...:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2011 1:22:00 AM

I read your expanation below and that was nice to see. I could tell that you were weaving past with present. what a fun sight, an auto rickshaw!

Joseph Osita

Date: 9/19/2011 12:52:00 PM

Great story. I watched each line like a movie. Nice imagery

Fabiyas M V

Date: 9/19/2011 10:15:00 AM

This a journey from the present stage(father) to the past.Road ends on mothers lap,where I am an infant ,and so my memory is vague there.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/19/2011 7:02:00 AM

This is a unique and pleasurable way to invite us on memory road through a life time of experience and culture to the present foggy time. The past always seems so much more clear because we know what happened then, doesn't it Fabiyas? Thank you for the inspired rickshaw ride and your welcome comment

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 9/18/2011 2:07:00 PM

Great write....very well penned..you painted a vivid picture here...smiles...chiquita

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2011 10:10:00 AM

Excellent descriptive and expressive work..Reading it was almost like being on an apartment balcony overlooking the scene..Sara