Fabiyas M V Poet Free verse

A Return Journey By An Auto Rickshaw

An auto rickshaw, a carriage
Like a tortoise
Returns
Along my obsolete graveled
Road.

The auto rickshaw rolls on:
My bucolic 
Rocks
Mirth of a birth,
Rapturously.

The auto rickshaw passes by a
Nuptial hall :a
Bride
Stands in the splendor
Borrowed.

The auto rickshaw pauses before a
Rural maze :
My
Career  knocks get
Mocked.

The auto rickshaw, the three
Wheeled, creeps through the 
Nostalgia
Scenting textbooks 
New.

The auto rickshaw halts now
On a lap, 
For 
The road is lost in 
Fog.

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Samual Ronthorpe February 21, 2012 at 11:12 PM Fabiyas, wonderful poem. Congrats on making Debbie's winners' list.................S.Ronthorpe

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 21, 2012 at 8:53 PM congrats Fabiyas on a top ten victory for this amazing poetry luv for transformation theme .. so outstanding a write luv.. hope u are doing well..

Carol Sunshine Brown February 21, 2012 at 11:20 AM Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Transformation" contest Fab. Love, Carol

Sashi Prabhu February 21, 2012 at 7:19 AM wow . very intresting depiction. congrats~and well crafte..... sashi

Sara Kendrick October 21, 2011 at 5:19 PM Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown October 21, 2011 at 6:51 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "any old butterfly poem" contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan October 20, 2011 at 9:28 PM fabiyas this is wonderful. Many congrats.

Bob Quigley October 16, 2011 at 12:10 AM Congratulations on your win Fabiyas. Well written

Poet Destroyer A October 15, 2011 at 8:10 PM FAB, CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for the support in my contest,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 15, 2011 at 7:46 PM Congrats Fabiyas on a great third place win with this lovely visual butterfly write my friend..luv..

Poet Destroyer A September 29, 2011 at 12:15 PM THANKS! FABIYAS... Yes, i'm finding time to read this poem and others... i'm excited with the note you left us poets here on the bottom of your poem... enjoyed the image you display here,,, you visioned it well,,, have yourself a great one,..p.d.

Nette Onclaud September 20, 2011 at 4:08 PM splendid sybolisms creating a mood that truly amazes, fabi...:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2011 at 1:22 AM I read your expanation below and that was nice to see. I could tell that you were weaving past with present. what a fun sight, an auto rickshaw!

Joseph Osita September 19, 2011 at 12:52 PM Great story. I watched each line like a movie. Nice imagery

Fabiyas M V September 19, 2011 at 10:15 AM This a journey from the present stage(father) to the past.Road ends on mothers lap,where I am an infant ,and so my memory is vague there.

Robert A. Dufresne September 19, 2011 at 7:02 AM This is a unique and pleasurable way to invite us on memory road through a life time of experience and culture to the present foggy time. The past always seems so much more clear because we know what happened then, doesn't it Fabiyas? Thank you for the inspired rickshaw ride and your welcome comment

Chiquitachiamaka Baity September 18, 2011 at 2:07 PM Great write....very well penned..you painted a vivid picture here...smiles...chiquita

Sara Kendrick September 17, 2011 at 10:10 AM Excellent descriptive and expressive work..Reading it was almost like being on an apartment balcony overlooking the scene..Sara