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A Requiem Verse

nothing moves, silence! echos of voices,past awake! faces appear,then depart! a tear trickles, slowly! the music plays, faintly! emotion erupts, again! regret whispers, in pain! Note: a quatorzain is a stanza or poem of fourteen lines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/8/2020 11:35:00 AM
Brian, truly beautiful !
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Brian Strand
Date: 1/8/2020 11:50:00 AM
Bless you Constance
Date: 11/28/2011 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2011 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed Reading your poem! Lori
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Date: 11/24/2011 10:06:00 AM
Wow. Like this one a lot Brian. It says so much in this minimalistic style. Congratulations
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Date: 11/23/2011 11:39:00 PM
BRIAN, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! Also to congratulate you in my "any poem goes contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.
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Date: 11/15/2011 6:48:00 AM
This is quite exceptional and beautiful,Brain.Thanks a lot for placing me among the winners.
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Date: 11/14/2011 1:44:00 PM
This is such an interesting form Brian. I really like it and your words are awesome. Thank you for selecting my poem for first place in your 12 line contest. You have made me very happy.
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Date: 11/13/2011 12:31:00 PM
As always Brian, brilliant....p.d.
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Date: 11/13/2011 9:00:00 AM
This transports me to several different scenes....a memory recalled, a dream...or an event that saddens the heart....all the emotion, that we have all experienced wrapped up in this simple form. Nicely done!
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