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A Renewed Hope- EL

A renewed hope in full bloom From earths ear marked little corner A bud has begun to bloom Morning dew caressing petals Rising to open fully She dares to soak up the sun A renewed hope in full bloom 8.7.2021

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Date: 7/31/2021 6:35:00 AM
Very nicely written, Carol. But your rhyme pattern was off or this would have placed higher. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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Carol Mitra
Date: 7/31/2021 9:36:00 AM
Thanks charles....now that you point it out....I see it, thanks :)
Date: 7/31/2021 4:47:00 AM
This is a very beautiful work. Congratulations on your placement!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 7/31/2021 5:03:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj....I am glad you liked it :)
Date: 7/7/2021 11:17:00 AM
Lovely words of renewal Carol! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you blooms of blessings!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 7/7/2021 6:48:00 PM
Thanks dear Sam....sending you some right back....much love :)
Date: 7/7/2021 2:36:00 AM
beautiful that is; innovative
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Carol Mitra
Date: 7/7/2021 3:41:00 AM
Thank you Mahtab :)