A Relic

It sits, unwavering, on my desk
  a relic from a by-gone era
Lowest of low tech
  its on/off chain unobtrusive

Classic lines, bronze weight
  solid as King Arthur's fortress
My initials traced in its dust
  Lights up my nights
    ~ Lets me write
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kiser Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 7:01 PM
I like that relic, it conjures creativity!
Wolf Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 10:28 PM
Like that word 'conjure.' Haven't seen it for a while. Inveterate Shakespearean that I am, I always remember Cassius telling Brutus: 'Brutus can conjure a spirit as well as Caesar...' ~ Hapless English Teacher
Wren-Ingalls Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 6:29 PM
I love that you are writing about something old and reliable! I also think that it's wonderful that it is something that is a source of light!
Wolf Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 7:57 PM
There you go! Hadn't thought of the connection that you did. Thanks! ~ gw
Michael Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 6:19 PM
An old bronze lamp...what is it...
Wolf Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 7:56 PM
Well, it's not a bronze-plated flashlight! Smiles, Gershon
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 4:37 PM
Items created long ago were made to last, even cars. Newer often isn't better. I enjoyed your tribute to your lamp that keeps you company when you write Gershon. I feel that way about my car. xxoo
Wolf Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 7:55 PM
You mean that your car keeps you company when you write, Connie?! Remarkable car you have! LOL. Thanks, Gershon
Watt Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 4:26 PM
So many things today are designed to last only a year or two (can anybody say 'cellphones'?) Nice to have a sturdy, old friend that always works and gives us comfort. Nice write Gershon ~ your relic friend John
Wolf Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 7:54 PM
Sure is nice to find something dependable. Now I'm looking for a goldfish that lasts more than a week. LOL. Thanks, John. ~ Gershon
Bauer Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 3:44 PM
sometimes those relics from the past (which always work better than what's out there today) are worth holding onto. i'm glad yours helps you when you write, gershon! i enjoyed your poem...
Wolf Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 7:53 PM
Yes, an old relic helps this old relic! :) Gershon
Kauffman Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 2:04 PM
As you say, I'm paraphrasing, as writers it is important to surround ourselves with things that comfort and inspire us - like creating a nest or safe womb. Nice write my friend. Blessings on you and your "friend."
Wolf Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 7:52 PM
Thanks for the creative comment, Sam! :) Gershon
Smith Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 12:13 PM
It's been loyal, doing it's best. A trusted old friend lighting your imagination...
Wolf Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 7:51 PM
Thanks for the elegant comment, Charlie! Stay healthy, Gershon
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