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A Red Rising Sun

a red rising sun sets aflame leaves of peach trees.... optic overload spirit set afire by October season change... leaves swirl in the wind sun rises later 'pon October's sunny sky... trees' red hair turns dull
Inspired by Skat A's contest "October Sky" Written: August 24, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/2/2015 11:44:00 AM
I love your imagery, Sara! "optic overload" is very creative! ~ Congratulations on a lovely win! // paul
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:01:00 AM
Sara, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT
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Date: 8/31/2015 5:52:00 PM
Wonderful write, Sara, a 7 and congratulations on your win. Hugs, Eve
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Date: 8/31/2015 10:06:00 AM
Beautifully constructed imagery, enjoyed a lot and congrats on big win... Bobby
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Date: 8/31/2015 4:46:00 AM
Wonderful string of haikus Sara! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win! Love that optic overload!
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Date: 8/27/2015 4:27:00 AM
Sara, among these three love the first!!! beautiful images!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 8/25/2015 3:41:00 PM
It's great getting to see what you came up with for this contest. My favorite was the first one. So clever: Optic overload!
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Date: 8/25/2015 2:13:00 PM
- This is really beautiful, dear Sara - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/25/2015 10:00:00 AM
Saw this, Sara, so vividly. Love watching skies! Loved this read.
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Date: 8/25/2015 1:26:00 AM
how visual, sara... by october, i feel the sky slowly nipping but this pretty piece is radiant.. huggs
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Date: 8/24/2015 5:36:00 PM
wonderful imagery good luck in the contest a 7 hugs eve
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Date: 8/24/2015 4:14:00 PM
beautiful imagery Sara good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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