A Red Riding Hood

The dark thoughts in her head
		 would pop,
		and the fear was her enemy,
		that much was said,
		but she didn’t stop,
		she proceeded ahead,
		a young girl, pure,
		feet sure,
		and the grass gave way as it should,
		to this little red riding hood,
		leaves cracking, branches bent,
	  	 the sound and scent
		of a wolf blew on the wind,
		as she moved relentlessly
		pausing only now and again
		to catch her breath,
		she knew that facing the wolf
		was almost certain death,
		something whispered in the darkness
		of the night,
		the wolf emerged silhouetted
		against the moon’s light,
		she fought back a scream,
		then she heard a river’s stream,
		the wolf knocked her on her back,
		slowed the attack,
		then turned her around,
		face in the ground
		her arms trembling ever so slightly,
		the air was cold,
		her small boots dangling,
		digging into the earth to hold,
		then swung free again,
nothing stirred, nothing was heard,   
		she listened,
		the wolf’s eyes glistened,
		her senses quietly separating the tune
		of the water from the tune
		of the gently blowing leaves,
		but nothing else was heard,
		not a cry nor a single word,
		then it struck her gradually,
		everything would unfold,
		and nothing else needed to be told,
		a chill came over her arms,
		her throat, and finally her face,
		that night was too lifeless,
		and she died in that place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 11:16 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 14, 2016 at 12:19 AM
Frank F. Atanacio, awesome poem, thanks for sharing. Always ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 1:24 PM
Frank F, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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January 28, 2013 at 1:14 AM
Just miss this great poetry.Glad i have founded it again.
Ginn Avatar
November 26, 2011 at 6:08 PM
Reading your poetry is like a rollercoaster, I hold tight not knowing where the twists and turns will end up. I like it
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