A Red Lollipop

A fading red lollipop
  shuffled slowly up to me

Told me kids now avoid him
  ‘cos he’s not nutritious, you see  

I whispered something in his ear
   with which he seemed to agree

Tell ‘em you’re packed with Vitamin S & C
   I said ~ (You know, for Sweet Candy)
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Kingston Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 10:23 PM
Aren't doughnuts all sugar-free like the lollipops of which you speak? I wish. Remember the Tootsie Pop commercial that asked, "How many licks does it take to get to the center of a Tootsie Pop?" Boy am I dating myself. :-( Now I want something sweet. Cute little sugary poem Gershon.
Hankins Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 8:43 AM
Clever and cute, gw. I still like them!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 4:32 AM
LOL! Perhaps lollipops in the hands would keep guns out…just saying, sweet’n those kids up.
Ball Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 1:33 AM
You could always melt that red lollipop down and pour it over an apple. My fave treat in Autumn ad at the fair. A sweet write Gershon. God Bless, JB
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