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A Red, Itchy Victim Speaks

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A flock of large birds or a fleet of small small planes is speeding towards me. NO! It's worse--mosquitoes! I failed to use repellent! I grab my swatter. They slap it away, laughing-- my baseball bat too. I’ll need a tub of itch cream, maybe a transfusion. The females descend to feast on me; the males watch,* rendering support with cheering and clapping. Next time I’ll use spray with DEET.
*Male mosquitoes do not bite living things; they can only consume sugary fluids and thus do not bite or suck the blood of humans or animals. This was news to me! August 21, 2021 entered in the Buggy Tanka Contest Sponsor: M.L. Kiser

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Date: 8/21/2021 9:05:00 AM
Yes but I bet they're cheering on the females lol. Hope you're well Janice and enjoying your weekend. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/21/2021 10:25:00 AM
Yes, the males are cheering on the females. Thanks so much, Tom. Janice

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