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A Real Traffic Flop

I CAN"T find my way from bottom to top
No sense of direction, a real traffic flop
Technology tries
Yet still, it defies
For me, GPS means Give up, Please and Stop

Copyright © Mike Gentile | Year Posted 2018

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July 11, 2018 at 1:23 AM

Ha, Ha! Terrific limerick, Mike. I always bet my (40 year old) daughter that the GPS in my head will beat her computerized one any day. I usually win too! Thanks for this one! ~ gw

July 11, 2018 at 7:10 AM

I envy you, I really have no sense of direction, Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 6, 2018 at 2:01 PM

- My sense of direction is rather poor ... I trust my GPS :))) - A good one, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

July 6, 2018 at 2:38 PM

Thank you xxoo

July 4, 2018 at 10:51 PM

Good one, Mike!

July 5, 2018 at 5:39 AM

Thanks Lyric Man!

July 4, 2018 at 11:32 AM

ha ha ha we borrowed a tom tom was so irritating we turned it off lol:-) hugs Jan xx

July 4, 2018 at 1:05 PM

Thanks Jan xxoo

July 4, 2018 at 10:39 AM

Love it Mike, give me a good old fashioned map anytime. Tom

July 4, 2018 at 10:58 AM

Right, thanks Tom

July 4, 2018 at 8:47 AM

A fun read, Mike. Well done, friend.

July 4, 2018 at 9:01 AM

Thanks Vijay!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 4, 2018 at 8:44 AM

Lol! Yet another tool to bypass thinking. Love it ;) xomo!

July 4, 2018 at 9:00 AM

Thanks so much Mo xxoo

July 4, 2018 at 8:37 AM

A very clever limerick, Mike. Well done.

July 4, 2018 at 9:00 AM

Thanks Warren, Happy 4th!

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